Annabelle is a mare living in the city of Manehatten, and in her life so far, she is having some trouble. Blessed with a disability that doesn't allow her to use the bathroom properly, she often finds herself alone in her apartment. Who would want to talk to a diapered pegasus anyway? Her story starts with a journal. It is said that this journal could help her by dealing with her feelings. The more she writes, the more she figures out about herself. Annabelle finds that this simple composition book, is about to turn her life around.
( Yes, this does include diaper usage. Not in detail, nothing that would qualify as fetish, and not constantly. This story was inspired by Tumblr blogs; "AskMindsetAndTinker" and "Crinkleloo". This story is not a pointless clopfic! It is going to have character development, a plot, and all the juicy things a good story has. I understand it may be disliked)
Oh wow, a interesting topic pardner. I have a friend that is like this... As long as you keep it clean, this will work stranger. Welcome to the community pardner!
3176036 Wow, that was quick.
It has it's errors, and I tried my best to have good grammar. I am honestly doing this for fun. Hopefully people will like its layout. I expect some... well dislikes
Not sure if I want to read or put in Read Later...
I don't wanna read now, but if it's in Read Later, that place is like a grave...
This is done quite well and the emotions are realistically done.
My only gripe is that Annabella and Dr. Lee are rather non-Pony names.
3176152 Yeah... I will maybe make a explanation for that later. Or I will change it.
Interesting, I'll keep my eye on this story.
3176345 Thanks for the favorite, like, and comment!
Annabelle sounds pretty interesting and I hope to see how things develop with her.
Aaaaand added to the Favorites list!
3176432 Thanks!
Wow, you guys really like this? This made my day... Well, night
This is a fantastic approach to a pony being in diapers; writing about their feelings! Brilliant!
I wish I had more to say, but there really is nothing to critique here other than you use "anyone" instead of "anypony" sometimes. But please, I do hope you continue this, it's quite entertaining.
3177223 Next chapter, maybe in 30 minutes.
Isn't the cover brilliant? Pony creator V3 believe it or not, and Windows snip tool.
Next chapter probably tommorow. That and editing/more prereading
I'm liking this story so far, Annabelle is an interesting character, with some relatable characteristics. I too have a smudge on my mirror I am just to lazy to clean.
I'm really liking the dialogue between Annabelle and her doctor. Very interesting developments.
Although I'm really curious to see how things go at the diner, I do like these little quiet moments with Annabelle going over her home life and history. Great stuff, as always!
Still waiting for the big surprise twist that the doc is actually Annabelle's long-lost mother.
"-Annabelle, those pictures of your mother... that's me."
*gasp* "-HOW DID I NEVER NOTICE THAT BEFORE."
Dun dun duuun!
3197900 Don't you think that is a little cliche? So yeah, no hidden mama's in this story.
I will poke a little fun and say that there will be some "mama action" in the future.
I wanted to let you know I am theroughly enjoying this story. It's warm and heartfelt. I really feel for Annabelle and look forward to your continued work. It's not often I want to hug a character and reassure them.
3199038, she'll meet her estranged mother?
Strange thing is I am browsing from some cheesy stories lately. Bloody Hell, this is so not like me.
GLaDOS, fellow, the story is nice. I like the way it is composed - like a first-person narrating. The idea itself is kind of... weird, so to say. Well, ponies have disabilities the same way people do, and struggling with those is an open wound for sufferers.
Still, it was a rather interesting reading. I expect the continue.
is it bad that I imagine Dr. Lee with an asian woman's voice (ex: my dentist)?
This story is perfection; the plot, the pacing, the layout, everything!
Thanks all of you guys, sorry I haven't been posting. I broke the writers block on my main story (Which is not a pony story) So I am going full steam ahead on that, instead of this. That, and I have been with my friends a lot, school, and other things. I will post another entry soon.
3223269 That isn't bad, I mean it is a Chinese last name. If you hear someone with the last name Soprano, they wouldn't get offended if you thought it was a Italian last name...
But Doctor Lee is not Asian. Her story is very interesting, actually coming from somewhere outside Equestria, she is a lot more then a doctor. That is why she made a good candidate to reform Annabelle, who is also a very unique pony.
I really have enjoyed this story, please come off of hiatus
3356696 I'm still in existence... I was actually working on a new chapter yesterday
3358319 Can't wait
Turkey?
Are the Ponies in your world omnivorous?
Ouch. Disturbingly, this mirrors real life quite well. There is a case where someone refused to help a lost child because they didn't want to be seen as a predator. A few hours later, they found that lost child...dead. The girl fell into a well and drowned.
3413762 darn... Sorry about the turkey
i love this book
Still patiently waiting the next chapter
3528135 fine...
this book is awesome!
we can really feel Annabelle's emotion, I really love this story because I'm stuck whit the same "problem"...
Now I am waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Still patiently waiting
I'm still alive, it's just hard
Writers block
3724195 If you have writers block I heard that writing something else usually helps.
Its good, and you should continue this idea.... Its a great idea :)
3800133 Heh heh, I don't think it works like that at all. I started writing my main piece that I've been setting upf or a year on Friday, two weeks ago. Since I've been getting so many positive reviews on that, the last thing I want to do is come back here. Just stand by, I'll start working on it again eventually
3809976 "eventually" I fear that word so much.
Oh god... I don't know if anyone is here.
Oliver has accepted a offer to do a cover for the story! With this new cover, and me dry for to do, this story will continue! I will unpublish it SHORTLY to proof read everything and make some edits. After that, the story will continue and the hiatus will end!
yay?
Now I don't want to sound like a needy, impatient fan but
<{IT"S ABOUT TIME}
I also love your new cover art
4307931 I'm writing now... I have something really, really, nice planned. Atleast, I love it a lot. It very warm. I hope you guys love it as much as I do
4308061
I finished the chapter. I WARN YOU. I didn't have time to proofread to the extreme. Hopefully there aren't too many errors. Night guys
4308172 I'm just glad it's alive, and yay, the doc had her foal
Spark's complementary filling --> complimentary
The hangover couldn't even effect --> affect
although I have a dissability --> disability
4308275 uh, yes, I will fix those
You know, just really late here and didn't have much time to proofread as I said. But it will be fixed
Aww, what a nice chapter! So glad to see another update!
This... I... there are emotions I cannot express for this chapter. I feel for her in so many ways because I think of myself in her position (well at least in mindset). I really hope this ends with a good ending, I haven't been able to really connect with a story since The Monster Below.
Keep on DM.
I adore this story, I'm not usually into the slice of life variety but when someone makes one that is as relatable and beautiful as this, who could resist. you are a fantastic writer and I hope you continue this story.
Alright, I upped it after I read chapter 2, now that I'm done with the 6th it deserves a fave and a comment.
I totally love this story. It's unique, in so so many ways... I'm glad to have found it! Hope you'll continue soon!
And don't worry about the typos, I think they just add more to the scrapbook-y feel of it all.