Gary, Michael and Daniel King are three brothers who find themselves taking an unexpected journey. Through a mysterious and sudden turn of events they find themselves in the magical land of Equestria. There is more to these brothers than they let on, and they will try desperately to avoid revealing any secrets. Most of them at least. Will they adapt to this land? Can they find a way home? Will they make new lives in this colorful new world?
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It's actually not bad at all for a first fic!
There were a few typos here and there and the formatting is a little rough. Maybe you should read over your story again and just do some minor checks. Also, make sure to leave a space between paragraphs. Other than that, good first fic! I can't wait to see more from you.
most of the time i don't read new fics
but this me gusta 
Why was this story added to basically all of the folders of the Human on Royalty group?
Very enjoyable i look foward to following this story.
3238005 They're already removed.
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You should really say something to the person that keeps doing this.
3239334 Was it the author or someone else?
I must read chapter 3 :crazypinkiepie:
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It was Kamen Rider Dragons.
You REALLY need to find someone to pick up on your grammar.
awesome.
Yes! This pleases Blade Star!
please continue
This is pretty good. Keep it up and remember to fix your grammar. Also if all three characters are main, then give each one a chapter instead of splitting it into three parts.
It will give a lot of character depth too.
3256385 Thanks, glad you enjoy. I was actually planning on dividing each chapter into three, one for each character, but I wanted to get the more introductory chapters done first. I suppose I could have done it for Chapter 3
. I'll try and improve my grammar as well 
Hey Morse code how often are you going to make a chapter
3262000 I can't give a guarantee on specific dates, but it should be about two a week. It will be one a week at the very least.
thank celestia i thought it it would be later than sooner
I. Love. It. Don't you dare finish anytime soon
I love it its beautiful.
So far you have done several excellent things in this story.
1. No cheap attempt to rewrite episodes, particularly 'A Canterlot Wedding'.
2. You have accepted that Twilight is now an alicorn and moved on with your life.
3. Your characters did not instantly accept and love the fact that they were stranded in Equestria.
4. No sign yet of unbelievable instant shipping.
An excellent story so far, keep going.
This is great. Keep it up.!
You idiot!!!
If things are going well, you're supposed to shut the f**k up or you'll screw yourself over.
Haven't you ever heard of Murphy's Law?
Bro, bro, bro, I'm am impressed, just- i'm not saying you're gonna- but Just. Don't. Let. Fluttershy. Die. You hear me
, sorry its just i read cupcakes 2 for some reason
I would ay something witty, but I can't be fucked to think of something right now.
Wow. Nice work you did. You're gonna go far kid.
best chapter so far nice job.
Fix some of the grammar mistakes and you'll have a great story.
3306846 Condolances.
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She is also my favorite character *cries*
YEEEES i like these people and their acceptacne of the situation very Human very real keep up the fantastic work
Does it live?
UPDATE!
Is this the story that used to be about about displaced humans who took over the Crystal Empire? Because it it was, it seemed a lot more interesting then rather than now. There was intrigue with the conflict associated with the Kings' right of rule by popular sovereignty and Cadence's claim of right to rule by birth. But now this seems to be a basic Human in Equestria story, but with three human brothers. Either way, not something that would catch my eye, but I hope you continue to write to your heart's desire.
Welcome back!
6883498 Can I get a link to that story?
So I take it by the romance tag they aren't going back to Earth?
Can you make part 2 of The Facade, please?