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Fimifc needs an Action tag...or a supernatural tag.
'light dark' (Not till later in the story though)
Twilight Sparkle, as the saying goes, 'prefers books to friends'.
When she moves to Ponyville to become the town's librarian she makes five new friends in Applejack: The farm pony, Rainbow Dash: the wanna-be Wonderbolt, Pinkie Pie: baker, party planner and fourth-wall breaker, Rarity: a fashionista and Flutterrshy: the kind-hearted girl who runs the town's animal shelter.
when she catches sight of a strange white foal with a flowing pink mane and tail, wings and a horn, the purple mare does her best to investigate, and is soon caught up in the fight between Magical Fillies- young female ponies that made a wish to gain magical abilities and help those that have been cursed- and Night Mares- Manifestations of despair, anger and hatred that curse innocent ponies and spread disharmony across Equestria- unknowlingly leading up to something not as magical as she expected.
Author's Notes
A fusion of events from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and the anime Puella Magi Madoka Magica. You do not need to know anything about the anime to enjoy this story. I encourage fans of MLP to give this story a chance.
For information regarding future chapters, sneak previews and so on, please check my blog on a regular basis. I would suggest my readers folow me to make things easier.
Well, given my avatar, I'm going to have to read this.
The typos and grammar mistakes were a bit excessive.
All of this before Pinkie even shows up.
I'd recommend finding an editor or at least a proofreader.
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I apologise for the typos, I really did think I got them all....I'll fix them up immediately.
Thank you for pointing them out.....
I can't believe there were so many...
3222792 I was expecting all that to end with "Now, if you really want to get better, there is a faster way... All you have to do is sign a contract with me. Simply make a wish, like being the very best at writing, and all your stories will be top of the feature box."
"All you got to do... Is make a wish."
A lot better than last chapter, but not perfect.
And so on...
As for the story as a whole, it's going... acceptably.
Do not disappoint me.
:3
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Typo's fixed.
I love Madoka Magica. I'm placing my trust in you. I haven't found one good Madoka fic here yet, so I hope this is the one.
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I hope so too!
Oooo, so close. This one looks a lot better than the previous two, but you still missed some.
Celestia reminds me of Manga!Kyubey.
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Will we be seeing her gradually move from cute to terrifying like we did with Kyubey (especially in the manga)?
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I certainly hope so, as the story gets progressively darker Celestia becomes more logical, more cold and seemingly moure cruel to the girls.
And I'm guessing you worked out the hint?
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Or perhaps more appropriately...
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If the Doctor finds out about bunny-cat, shit is going to hit the fan!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!
...well, I can't call it bunny-cat for this story. Bunny-Pony-Cat? Whatever.
As soon as Applejack popped up, I couldn't help hearing Applejack say: 'Hello, I'll be your Mami for this story'.
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Mami's role is a combination of both AJ and Rarity, Aj has the motherly side, Rarity has her flair.
and lol
Diamond Tiara may be a B*tch, but not even she deserves that fate...
A well written Madoka Magica crossover is certainly a rarity here on FiMfiction. Here's a like and a favourite. You've earned it.
4803722 Thanks!
First of all, this is really cool. I love this concept, and it's similar to what I wanted to do. Would you be upset if one day I created a story that had a very similar concept?
Second of all, I see that is has been a while since you updated this story? Is it because you haven't been getting a lot of reviews, or writer's block? I'm dealing with the same thing concerning my story Xenochronicle. If you want some support, you can PM me for advice or ideas. I like to brainstorm with other authors, and I'd love to see this story continued.
4899961 Firstly, I don't mind if you do a similar story, just send me a link so I can read it.
Secondly I can't use my computer much, so I can't update (Using my ps3 to reply), and while I am stuck on a few things I did start the next chapter, I just can't finish it...
If you like anime crossovers I have another one (MLP/Hakuoki stories of the shinsengumi crossover) That could do with some attention.
Ah, that's too bad. I'm going to be praying that you can finish it one day. Don't give up. I believe in you.
When I get to work on my story, I'll let you know.
The sound of a chello. Wow, that's sad. Poor Vinyl Scratch...