Twilight Sparkle has a plan to cure Fluttershy's... well, shyness. Can she succeed where so many ponies have failed?...
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*squeeeeeeeek!*
You've got a cute premise, one that would make for a great story in the series!
Good job!
The adorableness, THE ADORABLENESS!
another one that feels unfinished! i want more
also, if you're confused by the comments... I'm reading the series backwards sorry about that
The cuteness. It hurts...
Twishy
wait...no more??
There are so many adorables here, I cannot count them.
No, wait I'm alergic to adoribleness! *Reads story*
*Here lies Sikanto*
Positively adorable. It's a very gentle story, but very insightful, the way you identify parallels between Twilight's situation and Fluttershy's. It makes sense that they would find each other easy to be around.
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I really need to write those two in close vicinity again. I indeed found their dual introversion utterly adorable when the show first started.
So, um. I can't help but notice you're approaching #5. I will admit to some anticipation: #5 seems to be the one that hooks everyone. Pretty much where I first found my groove, too...
How did I get wrapped into a twishy?! Very sneaky................very well you won.
GAHHHHH!!! Too adorbs
That should be a thing in the series proper, for each of the races.
"Don't make me go unicorn on your sorry flank!"
"Say that about my grandmare one more time, and I swear to Celestia I'll go straight-up earth pony on you!"
"If I hear one more word about Winter Wrap-Up, I'm gonna go pegasus on the next pony I see!" (Actually, that sounds kinda dirty. o_O)
"Do you know who you're dealing with?! I could go full-blow Alicorn on you if I wanted to!"
You're just gonna ship everypony in this series, aren't you? =P
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I have my limits. You'll never see a Rarijack out of me :3 Or an Appledash either, these days.
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Fair enough. =)
This line still gets me.
Our first return appearances!
YA cover blurb, what are you doing
The opening scene is perfect and the ending paints a lovely picture, but the bits in between didn't quite land for me, previous quote aside. I think it's Twilight. Fluttershy feels almost spot on this time—just a little wordy, in places—but something about Twilight describing herself as shy feels odd. I think a tweak towards "and I want to learn how to be a better friend" would've kept it from bugging me.