While visiting Rarity, Sweetie Belle decides to commemorate their relationship with a drawing, but she doesn't want to make just any old drawing. She wants to make a masterpiece. The only problem is making it.
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This made me laugh, oh you silly filly!
Glad you liked it.
Well that is a good story, Rarity needs to have more moments like this with Sweetie Belle.
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Thank you Zeyon.
really nice little story..
I found one mistake though (I think)
shouldn't it be 'aware'?
This is really cute and sweet.
Awww, that was so beautiful. Perfect Rarity, just perfect.
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Thanks, Nightsflash.
At all points except the first point you spell it 'Sweetie Bell'. fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/063/d/9/sweetielarm_by_justmlp-d5x0b2e.gif
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Corrected... I think.
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Just read over it again, looks fine.
Oh, Sweetie Belle... You're so cute!
By the way, you spelled "unavailable" wrong.
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Thank you for playing spot the typo. You win a mustache.
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You're welcome.
And thanks!
That was heartwarming.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
well this is wonderful. I found it sweet, and not alot of stories can make me feel that way. jolly good show!
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Thank you.
Very lovely and sweet. Especially interesting showing Sweetie's development of drawing.
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Gotta love trial and error.
That was very good.
I could see this as a snippet from an episode, it's a quick little read with a good message that could even be applied to this site for some.
64>0 thumbs is appropriate, the only thing I could see someone disliking this for is how short it is.
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Thank you very much.
Dat end, man. What a great message. Thumbs up and a favorite from me.
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Awwww.
~Twi
Lovely story with a very sweet ending.
Aww, this was cute.
Awww, what a sweet little story! I can so see Rarity giving that advice to Sweetie Belle, as I'm sure she learned that lesson herself a long time ago. Well done!
I love this story! I made sure to like it! 👍
Guessing their parents don't do much actual work. I don't think they were anywhere near retirement age then.
this made me smile so much