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Like Looking in a Mirror

Fluttershy was just minding her own business taking care of her animals. Then she arrived. Who arrived? Why, Fluttershy of course! Wait what? Two Fluttershys? Well why not! It makes for an interesting relationship.

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shy sad jaded shard

shy sad jaded shard #1 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

i like it but would re-work the story a little now that you have a base for it at least to work with mite help to make it a shade darker a little under done from the dr given she is close to the real one but is a hmm crap my wording um night is to day sort of thing but still better then what i could drag from my mind

Midnight_Arc

Midnight_Arc #2 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

3311793 ...what? I seriously did not understand a word you just said.

shy sad jaded shard

shy sad jaded shard #3 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

3311959 crap i see what you mean i don't get it all i think i meant i liked it but maybe you should consider it a rough draft it had a lot going for it that all i meant sorry about the last comment lol nead to check wht i type b4 i click send meh o well

Midnight_Arc

Midnight_Arc #4 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

3312076 ... I'm going to act like I know what you're saying and assume you're saying that I should consider it a rough draft. o_o

shy sad jaded shard

shy sad jaded shard #5 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

3312617 yes and is my typing that bad?

Midnight_Arc

Midnight_Arc #6 · Oct 7th, 2013 · · ·

3313579 Well. Don't use txt talk, use punctuation, and capitalize what needs to be capitalized. The most important thing you should correct is using punctuation because I try reading it all rushed because there are no commas. Also try reading what you type after you type it, it can be improved.