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Sketch's life has changed. Having left his hometown and past friends and lovers, what'll befall him when he moves to Ponyville? What will he keep, and what will he lose?

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 29 )

This is the best kind of story, simple and sweet. It's also very well-written. I can't wait to see where you go with this! :pinkiehappy:

however, i do suggest making the chapters a bit longer, its more satisfying to read a big block at once, then a small chink every few days

I really enjoyed this! Very cute, I'll be tracking it! :pinkiehappy:

Lul.
That is all.

From what I'm getting, the CMC have aged in this. Correct? Also, I love the story man
keep up thy good work.

297424 You are correct, sir. The CMC (along with Sketch) are around 14-15 by this point. The show never really mentioned their actual age, so I figured I'd make one to accommodate a love story.
Also, thanks for the positive feedback, I appreciate it :twilightsmile:

>Flip to page 394.

I bet there must be something about werewolves on that page.
Also, a very nice story. Tracked.:twilightsmile:

297459 No problem man. Its a great story. I'm liking Sketch as a character, A LOT. If you ever need any help with the story, just message me. :pinkiehappy:

YAY! I saw that there was another chapter and got uber excited. I really want to see how this goes!:pinkiehappy:

SKEEETTTCHHH WHAT ABOUT YOUR MAREFRIEND???

i like this. much. so therefore, i will fave and read tomorrow before work. too late to read now.

loving every chapter. really dont wanna finish hehe

Noooo!!!!!! I really can not wait for another chapter in this amazing fic of yours. It's quite well written but not overly sweet or romantic, and it portrays young love so very, very well. Sketch feels like a really down to earth, humble character, which contrasts nicely with the over-eager CMC. thumbs up to you,and if i havent already, im gonna fave this and track you.

ENDED TOO SOON `cry` took me all of about 5 minutes to read this chapter....wish it took me like 10 or 20...anyhow another awesome chapter. I hate to see this fic end though...

FIRST!!
Also, d'aww to scoots and sketch. So happy this finally updated! must have moar!

Amnesia. I really think it's way too common in fics these days

I immenselt enjoyed the finale. Even found the songs from it, which make me absurdly happy, especially B.B.B.F.F. Being a big brother myself, I can relate to it. Another good chapter though it blew by way too quickly. I think I must read close to 1000 words a minute on this site.

a good bar fic is always enjoyable, and sketch has been a fine read, too. good luck and keep it coming.

*sits there shellshocked for a moment* wow.....I went in to this expecting anothe 4way love square like the other 2CMC + OC pony storys I've read but.....damn man this has got to be one of the best ship fics I've read in a while. the only problem I see with it is that its so damn short XD. great work mate can't wait to see what you wriye next.

899578 *sigh* one of these days my phones going to get me arrested by the spelling police:facehoof:

His cutie mark is a little lame but other than that a great ending to a great story.

wow great story... kinda wish it was longer though lol... imma watch you now...

“I know, but you’re so incredibly close. You know what you’re good at already, you just need to get better with it and whammo, look who has their cutie mark.” She sulked a bit, digging her face into her pillow.

Now if they can just figure that out in the show. If I remember the episodes right the Cutie Marks will probably something like: Applebloom-Construction/Building(And probably part of it to do w/ apples) Sweetie Belle-Singing and Scootaloo-Scooter Tricks/Daredevil(Or something related). That is if they ever get them which they probably won't, since their CMC antics make certain episodes funnier.

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