Twilight read the letter she had received from Princess Celestia then sat down on her bed in her room and thought about this.
The idea of what she had to wear was still mocking her
The hoof guards...
The dress...
The crown...
The confusion......
She sat there and wondered about all that and wrote one last letter for the day
Dear Princess Celestia,
I was wondering about the fact that I would have to leave ponyville in a while to come live back in Canterlot.
Just as Twilight finished that sentence she completely snapped.
She fell down the floor crying.
I'm currently at work so I'll read this story later. But in the meantime, I noticed two mistakes in the description.
I think your missing a word there.
And a comma there. And using "she's" instead might make it a bit easier. I'll read the rest later.
Thanks I'll fix those as soon as possible
Though this is a work in a long progress it is an on going series and I was never good at gramer
I really need to work on grammar