An ancient shadow stalks Rainbow Dash, intent on carrying out a plan a thousand years in the making but the shadow isn’t the only thing Dash is going to have to deal with.
What do you do when your future self suddenly pops in for a visit? What do you do when several dozen more suddenly show up? And what do you do when you have no way of getting rid of them?
It is a normal day in Ponyville... Or is it? Discord, Luna and Celestia bring a new Draconequus to Ponyville. And the Draconequus loving pony finds her way to his home.
Cool story. I saw a small spelling error ( I think) but other then that it seemed pretty awesome. One question though, what the hay is fluttercorn? I'm to lazy to google it.
'Just concentrate some energy into your horn and then boom. Magic. That is the only way I can explain it.' The greatest unicorn since Starswirl ladies and gents.
AH.... I get the ending... its about that recent Fluttercorn drama
Still, Rainbow deserves to be an Alicorn far more than any other pony!
Short, simple to the point. I like it.
XD Nice Fluttercorn reference (sort of). Now I feel the urge to draw Rainbowcorn with multicolored magic... That sounded cool. :D
Cool story. I saw a small spelling error ( I think) but other then that it seemed pretty awesome. One question though, what the hay is fluttercorn? I'm to lazy to google it.
I was amused. There was one typo though:
"Um... Sorry I have no idea how to DO ADVANCED MAGIC WHEN I HAVE MAD A HORN FOR ABOUT 10 SECONDS FLAT!"
Had, not "Mad"
This was executed terribly and incredibly rushed. I like the concept, though.
great hahahh
3398750 AGREED Oops caps on
3390511 Yeah! I uh... Meant to do that! Can you uh... Remind me what the hell is fluttercorn?
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Fluttercorn?
What IS Fluttercorn....
Lets just forget that ever existed...
'Just concentrate some energy into your horn and then boom. Magic. That is the only way I can explain it.'
The greatest unicorn since Starswirl ladies and gents.
I enjoyed this! Really funny and pretty good! But it DID feel a bit rushed!
You should give actual credit to the artist who made the coverart.