Aerospace Engineer that sacrificed his writing for education. Worth it, but I want to continue writing again! Da pacem domine.
"As I stare off to the mountains, I feel happy."
This story is about the past of a Brigadier General within the Equestrian Army Corps. and how it has affected him, if at all.
Made by TimeMaster and 'edited' by TallTalePony and DarkAvenger, I guess.
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Not bad. The editor needs to work a bit harder, though...
3406497 Lol, TTP worked in ten minutes flat. I made this in a few minutes, too.
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Figures...
Still, a decent effort. The concept kinda reminded me of Across the River and Into the Trees (since that happened to be my latest read). If you want to know how to do the "brooding retired officer" thing well, then I suggest giving that book a shot...
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I don't think he's brooding anymore
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Neither does the guy in the book that I mentioned. Also, learn to use the "spoiler" tag...
"turning off the fan and putting something on it" Replace "something" with the jewelry metaphor. It doesn't sound very good this way...
3406611 Thank you, honorary editor
It's a decent premise, and I did enjoy it.
The story needed to be edited better however, as I had a hard time understanding it at parts.
3407052 Don't worry, I will edit it soon. I feel like I have to spend more than a few minutes on this...
Also, ty for favoriting ☺
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;)
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Pretty good here.