This story is a sequel to Let Them Eat Cake
Applejack takes a moment to consider apple pie, and the stories behind them.
Edited by: PropdowPony
Apple Family Christmas used with ChiuuChiuu's permission.
This story is a sequel to Let Them Eat Cake
Applejack takes a moment to consider apple pie, and the stories behind them.
Edited by: PropdowPony
Apple Family Christmas used with ChiuuChiuu's permission.
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D'awww, this was great man!
There's a couple of teeny tiny errors in there, but you really got into the spirit of Applejack's attitude.
A cute little advice fic, made me feel warm inside this morning.
How not to make a connection with sisterhooves social... You extended the comparison.
I think you lost me there, for personal reason, begoing one of the dried apples of my family. So I couldn't agree with that sentence (even if, given my bias, I interpreted it my way).
On a more general point of view, You tend to affirm things and let little place for other possibilities. The fact that you tell a very universal and already accepted message lower the risk, but it was to be expected that if someone were to disagree anywhere in what you said, then he wouldn't be able to enjoy the story because he wouldn't have anybody else than the narrator to identify with.
Friendship isn't always easy, but... another reference. This one I'm not sure you should have made, knowing your target public and the association (you make a connection between friendship and family that can work in principle, but that you don't seem to have wanted to develop there).
Well, it was nicely written, just didn't completely work for me.
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Oh....
I did not even realize sisterhooves social used that comparison. Now I feel like a bit of an idiot.
There are plenty of other things you can make with dried apples that you can't make with apples that are just as good, however. Just a little different
I agree.
The hardest part with this story was trying to balance Applejack's character with making it appealing to many. It isn't the easiest topic to discuss without being too bland, unless there is a little bit that some might object to. In many ways, I don't think that everything Applejack thinks or says would be agreeable to everyone. It's nice to see that at least it is not the story itself that doesn't work, just something that she claims.
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First, thank you for taking my remarks so well .
No reason to. Your story stands very well on its own. My comment was phrased in a weird manner, but I saw no problem there. None at all.
I agree there, you chose a very difficult type of story and a very difficult subject. And you did a good job with it. At least enough to keep me reading to the very end even if I was in a disagreement. Can't please everybody, even when you don't do anything "wrong".
Well done. Nopony better to talk about family than Applejack. I really like this.
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Well now.
This was quite the story.
I can see why 3611000 tossed this into the Library. Well done.
~Skeeter The Lurker
A perfect compliment to Let Them Eat Cake.
NEXT!
I liked the metaphors and the structure, but I think it was a little too heavy-handed – even if that fits Applejack. Some more in-depth thoughts here.
That was a nice story with a cute, positive message, just like Let Them Eat Cake. Hope it gets a little more recognition