The Songbird has wandered for a long time. His programming telling him to crush any life-form that gets between him and his goal. However what is his goal? He can't remember. The programmed mind that sits in a once-human body is beginning to slip, as well as his sanity.
One thing is certain, he will get out, and he will spread his wings across the world. Or at least over Fluttershy's house, and once that happens they may find themselves in odd places, reliving other peoples lifes....
They may even end up exploring a city in the sky....... No not Cloudsdale... constants and variables.
Chapters (4)
Dis guna be gud
interesting....continue
YAY UPDATE!!!
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I hope you enjoyed it.....
Awesome I thought you were done with this story
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No just very very busy.... hope you enjoyed the 2nd chap.
I wonder if there will be any mention of the lab in Burial at Sea
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In fact I readjusted and was re-inspired by certain aspects of that and waited for part two before updating partly due to what part one did to me.
Sorry wait... I answered without thinking. Your talking about a location. I thought you were talking about the entire DLC. Sorry a bit too much tea. But regardless the happenings of Burial at sea are VERY important to me. So it is likely if the shoe fits.
(Also if your reading this after I edited my comment then do not worry yourself over my other answer I am a tree that is all)
4325146 Sorry regarding the shortness of the chapters.
What do you feel is a better length? I personally like to digest my reading regarding fanfics in about 800 to 1500 word chucks. (Or any other article or book I read as I often find myself stopping in the middle of chapters to process and think rather than at the end.)
Everyone has a way of reading that is silently different. So I am not sure what is better or worse.
Does anyone else have suggested lengths?
Or is the issue due to lack of detail?
Do you feel like I am leaving out information that should be included? Is this negatively effecting how you read the story?
Is that why the chaps feel short to you? Or is it a simple matter of length itself?
Fluttershy's an Elisabeth isn't she.
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I hope you did not take my post for offence, I simply need any scraps of feedback I can get cause I don't even know what I am doing. :P I need any little bit of information that I can get to improve, and feedback and wisdom is always favored over learning the hard way. You were willing to give feedback to my efforts! That is not something to take offence to that is something to cherish.
I will try to shoot for longer chapters around 1500 words or so.
Also thank you for your kindness. I hope that your pleased with the direction of the story, and the execution of it in future chapters.
Update?
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I am sorry I am simply not able to update much over the summer semester. I will try to be more timely.
4669440 How 'bout now?
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Well, I am about to have my first summer semester off in two years. So. Perhaps.
5904860 YA-wuuuuuuuuuuut
I just got chills... Well played.