Slowing Down

Just a short fanfic about a random day in Rainbow Dash's life. This sucks. Hard.

[Cover image by KageRyu798]

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SpringWonder

SpringWonder #1 · Mar 18th, 2012 · · · Story ·

I liked the content of the story and the style of writing.

I'm not sure about the ending though. Will there be a story related to this one that might explain the whole Little Nightwind thing at the end?
I'm just wondering because throwing in unexplained OC characters is kind of confusing even if it is Rainbow Dash being motherly.

Still it was a nice short story and thank you for creating it.

Lucefudu

Lucefudu #2 · Mar 18th, 2012 · · · Author's Notes ·

335281 I'm sorry to say that there will not be an explanation/continuation. This was an experiment of mine about a new way of storytelling. One that obviously didn't work out.

I'm happy that you enjoyed it; but I have to be sincere and tell you that this story is one I'm definitely not proud of. I even contemplated deleting it completely... but I guessed that someone might get some enjoyment out of it.

Rocket0007

Rocket0007 #3 · May 4th, 2012 · · · Author's Notes ·

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I thought it was kind of a cute idea, shame you don't want to expand on it, it almost demands some sort of pre-amble to answer some of the questions we the readers come up with such as: where did Nightwind come from, what changed to make RD want to 'slow down', and just how far into the future is this considered to be.
Either way, it was a cute one-shot.

Rainbow87dash