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You're obviously suffering from a severely repressed libio complex, manifesting as a projection of your own insecurities onto others around you... in other words, you're jelly of this. *Points at bod*

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Sun on the flowers. Warm muffins. The breeze on her face. Ditzy Doo, also known as Derpy Hooves, couldn't feel any happier at her retirement home. But her heart will always be with the Doctor. So on one of his daily visits, she decides that she wants to go on one more adventure with the stallion of her dreams. And when she leaves, there is an unspoken promise for the Doctor. That he will only have to wait for a little while. He must wait until they meet again.

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Crap.
I don't like, but like at the same time.
Don't do this to me.
WHY ARE MY EYES LEAKING??

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By enjoy, do you mean traumatized? :rainbowlaugh:
No, JK, it was really good:rainbowkiss:

It could have been better, but I still enjoyed it.
Yay! DoctorXDitzy!

The ponies were acting a bit out of character (or should I say the pony and timelord?) but other than that it was well written.

Wow, I had no idea that people would actually read this! Glad any of you enjoyed this, and thanks for the constructive criticism! Should I write another story similar to this, or what?

AH GOD THE FEELS AGH AAAAAAAAAAAGH:raritycry:

also nice story!:pinkiehappy:

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: ...there not tears its uhh...Liquid Pride...complete ly different...oh who am i kidding?! This Was TOO Sad! :raritycry::raritycry:

I needed this and more.
I feel like it's a promise to BE again and again till he dies too then even more.
to meet each rebirth always to be lovers and friends

That is pretty sad to the doctor he's only been gone for a couple minutes or even a day but to others he's been gone for a long time and Derpy waited for him for a very very long time had Derpy has not that long but luckily he did return and she even asked him to go to the place that they had their first Adventure and basically she's dying he doesn't want to accept it this he lost so much throughout his years but she wants to reassure him that one day they will meet again and then she was gone just like that and doctor was devastated again this was a sad one but this was good keep up the good work

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