Well, it was supposed to be a nice relaxing trip to Canterlot. But that never happens does it?
First, I sprain my hoof by falling down a staircase. I'm not even in Canterlot yet. Then once we get there, Discord shows up when we're greeting the Princess and acts all funny towards me. Then, to top it all off, as I'm reading a nice book, I get sucked back in time against my will. Isn't life just wonderful?
Wait.
...
Did you say Starswirl the BEARDED?!
Teen only because it might have some deeper, kinda darkish stuff in the middle. Not too dark or anything, don't worry! :D
DiscoLight (or Twicord, whichever you prefer) only if you're really looking for it. For those of you who don't like the ship, or don't like shipping in general, don't worry. No romantic moments or anything. :P
I have to say, I'm curious where you're going with this. The writing style isn't bad—it could definitely use more showing instead of telling, but it still clearly communicates the story such that it held my interest, for whatever that's worth. :P Tracking to see where this goes
3693276 Thanks so much for your comment!
I love whatever constructive criticism I can get! I will attempt to show instead of tell a bit more, but apparently I've always been bad with that, as I've been told that same thing many times.
Anyway, thanks again, and I hope you enjoy the story! 
Hmmm, sounds interesting. I'm looking forward to next chapters :)
GODDAMNIT.
3693521 Yay! Glad you enjoyed!
3693787 Is that a good goddammit or a bad goddammit? XP
what will happen after
3695136 Guess you'll have to wait and see!!! ;)
My read later list is already huge.
3697848 Aha! I get ya, man! Mine too! XP Hope you get around to reading it sometime!
Great job! I loved the buildup to revealing where Twilight was, and the writing overall in the scene felt really smooth and well-done, as well as funny--especially the 'Spoilers' joke
One minor nitpick:
I think you meant monarchy.
And by the way, the imagery in this sentence was phenomenal.
Keep up the good work!
3709236 Whoops! I should probably change that! Wonder if I can edit a chapter from my phone...
I was definitely trying to make a build-up, instead of rushing the storyline as I have tended to do in the past. And I'm glad you noticed the effort I put into the imagery!!! :D
That's wonderful story.
MOOOAAARRR!!!! :D
3714766 Certainly! Just you wait!
That was awesome! I'm hooked can't wait for the next chapter! I do adore Discord. You completely nailed applejack's personality and that 'my little ponies' line from Celestia was fantastic. I hope Twi will be OK, I shall read on.
WHAT?
Cliffhanger?!?! More! This is best story! 
4370384 Well, the idea of another person reviewing my story got me all hyped to finish a new chapter! So it should be up in not too long at all!
Hooray, this fic's back! :D I love the interactions between these two, but I feel like Twilight kinda sorta made a huge freaking mistake explaining to Discord (wait, is the whole 'Discord-is-Starswril' thing supposed to be a secret?) exactly how he gets defeated...
Still, if it's a problem, she'll hopefully be able to deal with it. Wait, is that a huge plot point here? 
Anywaiz, great to see this fic back, and I hope you make another chapter soon 
4370884 Aaaaah your reviews always make me grin like a maniac!
*evil laugh* You'll see. Oh, you'll see....
Wow, this was pretty cool! But why is Twilight giving him the low down on how she and the others defeat Discord? That's a huge misfire. It could get her into some real trouble in the future. I also liked the implied prejudice at the end. It certainly added some depth to the world building! Can't wait to read more!
4372575 Well, you have to understand. All she sees is her idol, who disappears hundreds of years before she's born. To her, that information wouldn't have any use during his lifetime, so she doesn't see a point in withholding it.
I was trying to think of a way to neatly end the chapter, and I just thought, "Oh, prejudice. That'll work!
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4372655 Good call, and you're right about the hero thing. If I was sitting face to face with my idle I would tell them everything, regardless of the consequences.
i really like this story is there going to be more???
4494154 Planning on it!
Don't know when the drive is going to hit me, but it comes and goes quite often, and the summer is a great time to write!
4503548 okay thank you so much for letting me know
YES TIMEY WIMY
Why U no Continue?
Wow, this story is so cool! Sadly hasn't been updated in... a while, but that's how it goes sometimes. I'm gonna favourite it just in case you ever write more :)
I wouldn't mind if there was a romance between the two, I would love it