This story is a sequel to A new friend
Second part of the Shard Vine saga. Eter encountered strange pony whose said to be in relation to him. What he not know is the fact that this stranger is more different and that he's also different because he's based from a ancient tribe.
This is all tell and no show
3740126 If you're referring to this chapter, it's still in progress.
3740126 I haven't got enough energy cause it took me so long to make chapter 1...
3742718 I was referring to chapter one, it seems like its very summarized. Instead of just telling us what happens in his day, why don't you create a visual image, it will make your story a lot more interesting