The doctor no longer travels all through space and time. After seeing the worst of himself and humanity he finds himself In Equestria, right outside of Ponyville. Ironically the Tardis is perfectly fine for once, but the Doctor no longer is.
The Days turn into years and the doctor is now a facet of Ponyville. Just when the Doctor thinks he has truly found a place he never wants to leave, a certain Rainbow pegasus comes to him with a desperate plea. This is a crossover with Doctor Who and My little Dashie. I don't own jack squat but I'll be damned if thats ever stopped me.
Chapters (4)
Eeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Do not want. My Little Dashie worked just so perfectly and hit such an emotional level standing on its own... If anything adding a sequel would do nothing more than undermine the original.
Forgive me as I judge without reading but honestly? This is a really really BAD idea.
I almost burst into tears at the end of this chapter, because My Little Dashie was just so sad.
I hope you can capture the emotion that was put into it.
Well, Huffy the magic dragon, I completely see where you're coming from. There are only a few fics out there that Have really touched me like that one. To be honest, I have no doubt that mine will not surpass it. But to say that something is so good that I shouldn't do my own interpretation of it is sort of hypocritial on a site of fanfiction. The whole point of this is honouring great works through your own stories.
Also, This story is going to be at least 50% doctor. At least. Anyway Huffy, don't be cursed by your name. And Thanks Zyggy. You might not be first in the alphabet, but you are in my books.
My Little Dashie was so sad... A part of me didn't want to read this to save myself the pain lol. But this looks interesting and well-written. I shall read the rest when it comes!
Hmm...gotta say that I loved My Little Dashie
, but so far this seems to be a nice
...Addition? Alternate Ending? Well whichever it is so far I like it!
Thanks Wolfblitz. Sweet name btw. And Reaper, you can consider it an alternate ending with a new story attatched. Really I don't ever want this to be cosidered anything near canon. Its sort of just a possible ending that can tie things up a little bit if you want it too.
A fic of a fic of a fanart... heh, this is starting to get as layered as some of the entries from the Remix Wars.
Interesting take, and I look forward to more.
SWEET JESUS CHRIST!!!!!!!!!!!
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO MAKE A SEQUAL LIKE THIS!!!!!!
Thank you!!!!
If you can pull this story off successfully I will completely and utterly love you forever
Well done.
I'm writing my own sad thing so, I don't want my heart to shatter too many times in one day
I'll definately give it a nice read though
Indent your paragraphs and put an empty line between them. Also, have your proofreader be more through. I spotted a ot where there should be a to.
"The Doctor made an effort ot close his mouth. "
Aside from that, continue.
Thanks Psyentiific. Sadly I'm my own proofreader, but I'll make sure I'm more on the ball. Or Else. And yeah, I think I'm going to indent the paragraphs. It looked a bit weird.
great!
I have always wanted a sequal to My little dashie, I felt it too sad to be ended like that.
Thank you
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU
I have been hoping someone would write a sequel to "My Little Dashie", I would have done it but my writing skills are terrible, I can find grammar and spelling mistakes just fine, but I just never had the patience for the story telling aspect.
You know, you aren't a bad writer...
And I understand wishing that some stories had a happy end.
...But really? Why?
My Little Dashie was perfect as it is. The only Fanfiction that I would say had absolutely no flaws.
Some people need to realize that some stories need sad endings.They really do.Would "Hamlet" have been any better if all the characters got up from their pools of blood and started square dancing? No. No it wouldn't have.
And My Little Dashie wasn't even that sad. It was bittersweet, yeah, but it suggested that brighter days were ahead and that two lives had both been touched by a glorious person and were ultimately the better for it and could go on with a greater purpose.Honestly, in the grand scheme of things, that's about as good an ending as you can really hope for. Combine that with the raw emotion of the story... how bare it lays the love of a father for his daughter... It doesn't need a time traveling romp with the Doctor to make things all sunshine, lollipops and rainbows. In fact, I agree with Huffy. All it'll do is undermine the original story.
And putting the Doctor in makes it even weirder. Are you trying to suggest that the Earth Dash went to is the Earth from Doctor Who? You know... the one where there have been Cyberman attacks, Dalek invasions and threats to blow Britain sky high from fat, green, farting aliens? That... that suggestion sorta sucks a lot of the bleakness and emotion of the world out of the original story.
Look... it's not badly written and the interaction between Dash and the Doctor is actually kinda entertaining... and I know you said it's only for fun... but can't you find something better to do with your time? ANY other story you might want to write? Anything at all? I mean... I'm not saying you can't write this story but it really feels like you shouldn't.
Ignore the critics and naysayers and keep writing your story, it's great and goos dude.^_^
*goos = good
let's see where this goes shell we
Baked Bads, I completely see where your coming from, and thank you for the compliments. I totally agree that My little Dashie had a perfect ending, and if that author were to come to me and say that he wanted to use my ending, I would say he's crazy. But what I hope I'm writing is not a sequel in anyway. Its more of a what if, exploring if the story did have closure (sorry to show my inner nerd, but I would compare it to Marvel's what if stories.) Of course Rainbow never comes back, the story ends early. All I'm trying to show is a what if.
As for the Doctor being there, I'll act like the writers of that show and say that for some reason humanity has forgotten all of that. Thank you for your well thought out criticism, and I really do mean it. I wish I could do more to work on it, but I'm not stopping this story just yet. And of course, the very fact I am writing this implies that I have very many better things to do, but sometimes you just need to let the vice president make some descions for himself.
Interesting story. It'll be fun to see your take on this ending.
I'm not one of those who thought "My Little Dashie" was a perfect story, or had a perfect ending. It was full of flaws. It did have one thing in abundance however: Emotion.
And really, that's why I read fanfics. For the emotion, literary flaws I can gladly accept if a story has character.
You have a creative idea going here as well, I do look forward to the next chapter. I recommend getting an editor or proofreader before you post it though. There's some rough spots, and a few easily noticed spelling errors and redundant lines, but I'll still be happy to read more.
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I agree completely, but for some reason, I find endings like that unsettling.
Like I want everything to work out for everyone.
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I am confuzzled.
How am I the first in your books.
nvm Zyggy. nvm.
WaNt MoAr!1!1!1!1
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I agree.
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More Please ?
Hey guys, sorry I haven't posted here in a while. Thank you for the requests for moar even after I haven't updated in like two months, that always makes me feel awesome. So as thanks for that I'll tell you guys where I'm at. Originally, I started writing the next chapter and I hit a block because I figured I sucked at dialogue. Than I wasn't sure if it was alright doing this fanfic of a fanfic, and eventually I just shelved the whole project.
Looking back on it now most of those reasons for not continuing from an idealogical stand point are gone, but I am pretty busy right now. What does that mean? Some day I'll pick this fic up again. Maybe christmas break, maybe earlier or maybe way later. However, where I left this just isn't fair to anyone who actually read this, and seeing how this fic is more popular than everything else I've written combined, I think it deserves an ending.
So, yeah. tl:dr? Its not dead. Check back in a month and maybe it will be alive again.
WELCOME BACK!!!
Glad to see you back I hope it's more thin the Tardis appearing Dash going 'Heya thanks for rasing me thank buh bye' and the Tardis disappears.
You had me at doctor
I'm a serious DW fan and I read my little dashie... You are giving back to the man what he was forced to give back: a lifetime of joy and happiness. With the doctor no less. I keep track of this
SQUEE!!!!
Glad to see you're writing again!
From what I know about DW (quite a bit) something bad is going to happen...it always does
43006 Back at ya!
43053 Well, there goes the first draft....
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43419 Bah, since when is anything the doctor does predictable?
43289 Thanks! I never really stopped writing, just this fic in particular. But yeah, Its about time I got back to this.
43062 You also had me at doctor.
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Since forever, some thing bad always happens.....always it's the only predictable thing in the series, otherwise he wouldn't be the Doctor
Now I'm certain you're dead
14457 i know exactly what song your referencing
Great work so far i sure hope you can finish it
So. I just looked up what a 'jammy dodger' is. I look at the pictures. The fourth one is the Doctor holding one at the camera. SO MUCH WIN!
So, I'm just going to go on the level with you guys. I've completely lost interest in writing this fic. It sucks, because this is far and away the most viewed thing I have ever written. However, I can't take pride in that because I'm piggy backing off a fic which is riding the coattails of an image which was made in tribute to a show. I didn't exactly make this and I can't really be proud about it.
If you enjoyed my writing style, feel free to check out some of my fics I've written that are 100% mine (barring characters and setting
) like Rainbow and Clyde or Belated Birthday. If you enjoyed this for the plot alone, then I'm sorry but you'll probably have to make your own ending. Most likely you've all probably forgot this story, and I am completely ok with that.