I had been invited to the Riches home the other day. This had excited me at first, why shouldn't it. They are rich and affluent in the community, so it is a great honour.
Mister Filthy had me dressed up in a fairly curious suit, just before bed. I did not feel as if I could refuse him. In part, because he was quite nice about it and the suit isn't really feeling uncomfortable. I expect him to know what he is doing.
Early in the morning, he had sent for me and had me woken up. There was this curious girl waiting for me in the room. She gave me the treat. Maybe I had enjoyed it more than I should have. He had left me alone with the girl. She had me served a treat for breakfast as well.
Just after breakfast, I had met Snails. That was a surprise, quite the shock. Maybe it took me a bit longer than I thought it should have taken me to see it. He had apparently been given the same treat, while wearing a suit identical to mine.
This is when the true shock hit home. I could see his reaction on his face, but he could express his feelings in words, no more than I could. I had apparently been rendered incapable of speaking as I had been used to. I saw his disappointment and fear on his face, just as clearly as I imagine he saw mine.
In the end, all I could do is to hug my close friend, hoping to comfort him, the way I hope to draw comfort from him.
A while later, we were led out into the back of his yard. Now I realised, just how little I know about him, his family and his habits.
Should I have refused to come to his place, before I had realised the consequences of coming over? Could I have refused him? Did I even want to know the answer now? It is clearly too late to ask, not just because I am mute to him and the rest of the once I know, but it is too late to change anything.
I could see him by my side, merely giving a quiet whine as he looked at me. He had been my friend for several years, now merely a pet and a Pony just like myself. Mute to any passers-by. Strange how easy it is to recognise him, even now.
He may be a mere pet to any and all who see him, but to me he still is the same friend I had known for as long as I can remember. I had been his friend for just as long. I have reason to believe we had been friends before that as well, even if I can never recall what was before that. A friend is a friend, you don't go around and betray your friends. I may not be the element of either honesty or loyalty, but it doesn't make me either disloyal or anything, does it?
At first, seeing Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon had been exciting. It had felt like such a promise. Only then, I saw her angry looks, something had obviously ticked her off and royally so.
I kept my distance in hope she wouldn't take it out on me. Why take a chance on it. What if it had been my fault all along and she merely waited for me to give her the excuse to let loose her furry upon me.
I am a colt, not a hero. Maybe I had read a book of Daring Do, but I had no interest in trying to live up to the standards, or taking the risks involved.
The only thing worse than her taunting jabs, is the silence she was maintaining now. I am but a pet Pony, this is what I would fear the most. Even if I at least had a single friend by my side.
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oh so you do have more fics of my interest then eh?....
although the description confuses me greatly.....
5083833 From the groups' listing on your page, it is likely.
I have some 50 stories currently on the site, so if you enjoy the first you encountered, it is very likely you enjoy the next story of mine.
I try to come up with a new idea for each story, so they are most likely promising a new experience each time.
5084322 cool stuff , funny though how after all this conversing you've done with me i haven't really seen any of the broken english grammar that's so present in the first fic of yours that i read , you actually seem to be conversing a lot like i do which i thought would have been impossible up to this point , i wonder why that is.....
5084403 Part of it would be in how I try to express o much more in the story, then I usually do when I am chatting, I guess.
There is a chance that some of the problems in the stories are from where I leave them, as my Muse abandon the story.
Could ofcause be in the border between what I can filter out and what I miss?
Oh well, I have been chatting for numerous years
your muse does what now? what's a 'muse'?...
as have i....
5084830 hmm
Muse as in inspiration, what drives you to write a story or draw an image or any similiar artistic endevours.
If I read this right, rather then left, you have been around on chat for a good while, then?
I used to be on egroups and onegroup before Yahoo bought it all up. it was quite alot of fun, from time to time.
5084990 i see , another first...
well i've only stuck to stuff like this , i don't do forums.....
5085172 There was no forum back then, as far as I recall, you could send E-mails to the groups. There was a Chat for each Group originally.
5086582 oh i see , you're talking way old school , lol im to young for that.....
5086979 I guess it is "Old School", yeah, I survived the millenia ..
ok , what the fuck is going on in this story? cause i couldn't tell for shit.....
5088738 What happenes?
Setting up the scene for the first/original pet, then we follow Diamond Tiar.
After that we have a reaction to what hapenes to her, before going back to see more of her new life.
Hope this made sense, without setting off any Spoiler-Alerts.
5090580 mmk , so who's human at what point where? and then there's anthro and pony involved as well? couldn't tell anything with that either.....
5091498 the new arrivcals where human.
DT and friends would be the Ponies.
5092243 right , that still leaves everything up in the air for explanation as far as i can see then....
5092667 You did read the chapter where Diamond was introduced to her new life?
This scene is supposed to explain much of the general sittuation for the entire story.
5099917 i did , but then i wasn't sure who was human where with what and if we had moved on to another character and where did the main character go?....
5100537 maybe a few details would be clearer, if you read it knowing they were entering as humans, while turning anthro fairly early on?
I thought it felt logical and clear while I wrote it, but it was my story so I my have been biased on the point?
If you do read it again, with the details explained, let me know how it came out?
5100738 we'll see....