It began as a chance encounter between Fluttershy and a young Dragon-Type Zoid named Genobreaker after befriending her and her friends Breaker introduces his Friends Red-Eyes Black Dragon, Blue-Eyes White Dragon, Wind Stalker the Wing Dragon and Ice Dagger the Ice Dragon. Spike also joins his fellow dragons and together this new "Dragon Team" have all kinds of epic adventures and hijinks as Ponies finally learn about dragons and another race long thought to be Extinct, Zoids and show Ponyville and all Pony-Kind that their are things more powerful than "The Magic of Friendship". This is what happens when My Little Pony, Enters the Dragons
Good story
3866116 Thanks and this is only the Beginning
3866227 idea for title dragonic guardians
3866859 hmm thanks for the suggestion
3866859 Hmm "My little Pony Dragonic Guardians"
Im liking that
3866986 i know right
Excellent chapter and I somehow knew that everypony in Ponyville was going to get freaked out by breaker
red eyes is nexst
Unfortunately, there were quite a lot of errors in this. Shall I copy this and fix any errors, then send you the edited version?
Have a nice day.
I think you may be a little confused between these terms you used to describe the dragon.
You say he is a Blue GenoBreaker, then you say his name is GenoBreaker, then you say he is a Zoid. Which is he? It's kind of important. Please respond ASAP so I can continue the editing process.
Good introduction chapter. Need a bit in punctuation here and there, but hey, you know what you're doing. Keep writing, bro.
5027274 Thank you
5027317 anytime, bro.
I wonder what Princess Celestia's reply says
5158829Youll have to wait and see
5158840 Alright
I'm not sure I missed this but I seem to have gotten confused as to how big genobreaker is? Is he supposed to like a head taller than celestia or is he supposed to be the size of ligar-zero?
5190899 Hes smaller than the standard model here cant make hi mregualre size otherwise it be more of a monster movie or something so yeah hes a head over celestia maybe 2 feet taller or something
Short but it has potential....
5295738 Its still a work in progresss im working on chapter 4 now the ACTION should kick in in chap 7 or so
Good chapter can't what for the next one.
Though you and your proofreaders may want to look over this chapter and the next one, there are quite a few spelling errors, but it is still good in my book.
5823917 THANK YOU VERY Muck and sorry about that yeah 3 and 4 im getting new Readers so their Different form the last the first one was a Pro But Seriously Thank you im glad Folks Like it I just wish I could get Hasbro to make it in the show
5823928 This is a great chapter But some of the character's names don't have the first letter in capitol for example Twilight is twilight
5831906 ok Miner messup
5832326 It's alright. I make mistakes too. Your proofreader should have spotted them though
5834037 Eh what are ya gonna do
5834064 Never mind. I think it was funny when Breaker shook Celestia like a toy and freaked everybody out with his power
5834105 HEHE Thanks what about what happened on the Train