• Member Since 29th Jan, 2014
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KeenWit


I'm a small, aspiring teenage artist just looking for improvement. Nothing more, nothing less.

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Changelings
Critically feared, yet misunderstood ; A lesson that many would like to share with the world of Equestria. It has been two years since the invasion of Canterlot and now a new settlement has risen in the Southeastern Grasslands led under a certain Changeling named ‘Price’. Once a simple commander under Chrysalis' rule, now a free changeling along with thousands of others, willing to set out into the world and show the world that Changelings can integrate within Equestrian life.

However, ever since one fateful day, there have been a couple concerning issues sprouting. The presence of wild monsters in the area is a bit of a threat to the nearby residents, causing many to undergo fear of being incapable of handling the possible beasts yet to have been seen. To make things worse, the animosity between changeling and Equestrian has not died down, giving them support from other ponies ranging from slim to none. The presence of wild beasts puts a halt to the signing of a peace treaty with Equestrian forces, and so the troubles pile on more and more.

How can a a former commander turned king handle such a pressing matter?

{ This will hereby stand out as my 1st fanfic ever, so I would appreciate it to get some feedback. I'm a bit nervous about writing this, but I have high hopes for making a story around this concept and I'll do my best to work hard at it.
I'm... Not entirely too descriptive, but I'll actively work on these stories and try to improve where I fall short.}

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Comments ( 2 )

Well, the pacing is extremely fast, but other than that it's pretty nice.
You should add the Changeling tag though.

... There's a changeling tag? XD
Sorry, Musta looked through there, like, I don't know how many times, but then again, I started on this in the middle of the night :T.

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