the great and powerful trixie recently took in a certain wall-eyed rocket launcher happy mare (then promply evicted her) and is now returning home from a two day long wizard convention in canterlot. (this is the product of a idea that just hit me in the head, and wouldnt stop until i made this Ps look up the song windy from conkers bad fur day soundtrack, i think the song goes good with the beggining of this story) hope you like it please like and comment cuz im so sad and lonely. and i want to improve my stuff.
Chapters (1)
DOOM MATES!! Starring the Great and Powerful Trixie as Merasmus and Derpy as the RED Soldier. This is pretty funny.
3872481 really glad u liked it!
Actually very funny,
But if you want to make a more individual style you could change some of the events from the comic to give the fic an identity for its own, just an opinion.
3872530 well thats what i tried to do i chaged quite a bit i thought, without missing the point of the comic itself, its a crossover after all
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Anyways well done I really enjoyed reading it.
3872544 well thank you
(in a mortal combat voice)
derpy winz!!
Oh I love that bar part it was hilarious
3873266 good cuz thats what i was going for dat plus i like your pic
its a pinke pie version of "cute fireplace pyro" from the comic
"true meanings" right?
3873483 Yep, is the ponifition
Howdy Heavy, we're just checking out some of your other work here. We thought this story was great for being put together in an hour.
Our favorite line was
This was gold.
For a sixty minute story we give it a 10 out of 10 cause it made us laugh a lot. This Derpy and Trixie "teamup" was fantastic. Anyways, we hope your latest story you posted today does well.
4195011 thanks that really means alot
, can't wait for the next Ernest in equestria chapter BTW!
-HWB
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We posted one two days ago. Just incase you didn't know, But you probably already know that.