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CheesePie. I have nothing else to say.

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Several months after the events of Pinkie Pride, Cheese Sandwich writes a letter to Pinkie. He asks her to come with him across Equestria to collaborate with him on the parties he throws. Over the span of a month, they will travel to 30 different locations and throw 30 different parties. But during this time, will other things take place between the candy-coated mare and the Lone Planner?


This is a bunch of short oneshots about Pinkie and Cheese. Most of these will be shippy, but there will also be silly bits and bits where they're just friends. If you have a particular location in mind for our pair to venture to and party down in, let me know in the comments section and I'll see what I can do. Seeing as we haven't really been introduced to 30 Equestrian locations, I will need some help figuring some out.

Cover art by the lovely and talented SlashopentheSky

Update Feb. 3, 2014: Under the "Popular Stories" tab on the front page ALREADY, guys? Holy cow, this thing is barely started and has only been up for a few hours of me writing this. Calm down!

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This sounds like a cute shipping fic. And I'd be more then happy to suggest some places in Equestria if you need them. :heart:

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That would be amazing. I'm still trying to think of a good first stop on their Magical Mystery Tour. :scootangel:

Spike would be a good baking assistant. But for foalsitter, well that's no a brainer, just get Fluttershy or Twilight, or maybe even Rarity. :eeyup:

3891266 Ponypalooza. The town where Pinkie's rock farm is. Cheese gets to meet Pinkie's rockfarmer parents, in their "Amish Pardise".

I can't wait to read the next part of the story. Best of luck

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Thank you so much! I look forward to writing it!

I think this is awesome! Keep writting! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiehappy:

They need to go to the crystal empire, and since it is tecnecaly not a place in Equestria, I'd like to suggest that they'd go to Dodge Junkan ( spelling?)?

Dawwwwwwww dat ending.

Crap. I had a similar idea--just the road trip. Do you have an issue if I go ahead and write it anyway?

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I don't see why not. I don't have a monopoly on these two or this scenario, and I won't discourage anyone from writing. :scootangel:

About time someone posted a CheesyPie fic!

I can't wait to see where this goes! :twilightsmile:

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Well, there are a couple others, but there aren't that many and the ones that are there are mainly clop. :pinkiesick:
I can tell you where it goes: all over Equestria!

3892139 Thanks! I think it's so much nicer to ask, don't you! I think I can promise to be different enough, and I'll enjoy reading yours.:pinkiehappy:

I have a kind of similar story in the works, he he. Time to put this in my read later so I don't accidentally get influenced. :twilightsmile:

Pinkie's... room... is... bigger... on... the... inside!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy: Pinkie... is... a... time... lady... pony!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy: *Faints from to much epicness*

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I'm surprised it took that long for anypony to notice that one. :scootangel:

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I just started to read this and the instant I saw that she said that her room was bigger on the inside I started to freak out! :pinkiehappy:
Princess Pinkie Pie approves! :pinkiehappy:

I guess I'll have to go and read the prequel to this so it all makes sense. Congrats on the listing!

Eyy, you're popular! WeWT!

I guess I'll have to go watch the episode (and several preceeding episodes, honestly) and then read this!

Also, I like the little link to mah homepage. I expect many boo's and /tomato's on my comments. I appreciate the gesture!

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And well do you deserve it. :heart:

I gotta say I'm not a big fan of Cheese and Pinkie together in any romantic setting :rainbowwild: but I totally want this to continue. :pinkiehappy: I'm slowly growing into it. :heart: So please continue.

Yay! A CheesiePie story!!! You're now my new bestest friend! :pinkiehappy::heart::yay::derpytongue2:

I d'awwwed so freaking much at that ending. Way too cute!!!!:heart::heart::heart::twilightblush::yay:

When's the next part coming out?:pinkiehappy:

You. Must. Spend. Every. Living. Breathing. Second. Making. This! encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT4ndNEzvj5VlmnKnzMhzqWPqjSGoovO4g6mqNFvW1QxGtI9lOX

oh! also......THEY. MUST. GO. TO. CALAFILLY!

Flipping adorable!

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Something tells me that I accidentally did something that I'm going to regret.
I'm hoping to get a new chapter up by later today, but I can't make any promises; writing takes a lot of time and energy on my part and I need to eat sometimes. :scootangel:

WOOT WOOT for CheesyPie! It's like a cheesecake BUT better!

Ideas for where to go? What about Appleanta?

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As in Atlanta? The apple state?
Hang on, I'm suffering from a bit of irony overdose. :rainbowlaugh:

Fiesta Equestria July 11-13 2014

Marriot Westchase, Houston, TX

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Yeah, I completely forgot about that particular convention until AFTER I published the story. But I like the assonance of the name, so it's staying. :scootangel:

I spotted a small spelling error.

"Pinkie wracked he brain for anything else they might have left off of the list. Balloons? Yup. Confetti? Uh-huh. The Welcome Wagon? Check-mate..."

Anyhow, I can't wait to read the rest of this story! ^_^ You seem like a pretty good writer (the dialogue sounds natural and everything's reading swimmingly). I look forward to reading more. Also, that ending prologue is just d'awwww. I hope you're planning to tie all these one shots together somehow. :D
How long are you planning on making each part? And do you realize you could also write about Spike trying to do what Pinkie does back in Ponyville? :b

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Aww, crumbs! I thought I caught everything! Thanks for pointing it out.

Stop it, I'm blushing. :twilightblush:
I may do a sequel that explores Spike's adventures and mishaps, since I mainly used him to fill plot holes. And I'm planning each oneshot to be about 1-2k words each, though I may do more or less depending on how much time I have and how much fun I'm having with the chapter. I have a bit of a busy semester coming up, and I just wanted to write something that I could do at lunch or during spare instead of some novel-length epic on Scootaloo's secretly depressed and paranoid state.

3896136
Hmmm, you're right. Maybe I need a third one, just for insurance! :scootangel:

3895695 :fluttercry: you mean you reget writing it or you regret something you wrote in the next chapter? :fluttershysad:
I know for me, because writing is my passion, I just get emerged into the world of my mlp fanfic and I just keep writing. :pinkiehappy: but that's different for everypony.

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More like I never expected my writing to get so popular so fast, and I'm beginning to regret the fact that I'm writing 30 of these plus potentially an epilogue plus potentially a sequel. I'm afraid that I may have bit off more than I can chew. :eeyup:

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Well I know it must be hard to be under so much pressure to get new stuff out to appease your fans but sometimes you just gotta say :flutterrage: "Cool your jets" and do what feels right for ou :raritywink: Your writing will refect your emotions if your stressed then your writing won't be as good and that won't please your audience. :facehoof:

:pinkiesmile: Sometimes as an audience we forget to think about the people (ponies) who gave us what we're obsessing over. We do need to think about them while their thinking about us.

Is any of this making any sence? :rainbowhuh:

Muzzletréal

YES!!! Someone did it!! I love you so much right now!!!

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Don't worry about the Spike sequel if that's what you mean. You didn't promise us that by just mentioning a maybe in a reply to me. :pinkiesmile: I really hope you can continue writing at least. In my opinion, I wouldn't mind too much if it was shorter than 30 days/one-shots, just as long as the whole story has the basic exposition, climax, and resolution, essentially I'm just hoping it's a complete story. Not complete by length, but by plot. I hope this makes sense.

We, well at least me hehe, don't mind waiting a while between chapters. Write when you get an idea and don't turn it into work or chore, because then you'll get unmotivated to finish, and that won't be great. :pinkiegasp: But please don't forget to update either. :derpytongue2:

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I'm Canadian. It'd be a crime if I didn't. :scootangel:

first stop on the party train: Manehattan OR Fillydelphia

This is great so far! :pinkiehappy: And the actual idea of Pinkie and Cheese travelling around Equestria together for a whole month is too epic to be true! :yay:

These are the canonical locations in the show I can name off the top of my head. Fillydelphia, Baltimare, Manehattan, Canterlot, Appleloosa and Saddle Arabia. Now if you excuse me, I have a literature to read.

Ahh! I love it so far! :D Please update soon!? :pinkiesad2: :heart:

Great story! :twilightsmile: I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I can't remember where, but I read Seaddle somewhere and thought that was pretty clever. :)

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