The Sabre Saga

Twilight and her friends are sent to the Crystal Empire to investigate reports of attacks on Princess Cadence's archaeological teams. The trail leads to Blackhoof Valley, the homeland of King Sombra. There they find themselves face to face with a mysterious gray alicorn and are soon entwined in a perilous and emotional adventure.

-This story was originally written in 2014 and takes place in the cannon as of midway through season 4. See Author's note for details.-

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Part 1: The Prince of Shadows · 4th Feb 2014 · 10,215 words
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Part 2: A Play of Light and Shadow · 2nd Aug 2019 · 10,233 words
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Part 3: The Shadow of a New Dawn · 8th Aug 2019 · 11,006 words
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Russian Bank Teller

Russian Bank Teller #5 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 1 · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

whoa whats with the comment graveyard

Marezinger Z

Marezinger Z #6 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 1 · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

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It was all old comments from 2014 that don't apply to my current edit. I'm starting from scratch. They weren't anything bad, just no longer relevant.

Spooksi

Spooksi #7 · Jul 26th, 2019 · · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

Black and red Alicorn OC as the cover, but decent grammar? What in the heavens did I just stumble upon?
Edit: This is......actually a decent read. I think I'll look forward to more. So glad I don't judge fics by its cover.

karnazom

karnazom #8 · Jul 26th, 2019 · · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

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Besides, most of those commenters either stopped in 2015 or still active and lurking

Russian Bank Teller

Russian Bank Teller #9 · Jul 26th, 2019 · · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

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ah ok

coolcatnate

coolcatnate #10 · Aug 8th, 2019 · · · Part 3: The Shadow of a New Dawn ·

Season 2 The Sabre Saga: a battle for the heart

Toriandthehorse

Toriandthehorse #11 · Sep 16th, 2019 · 1 · · Part 1: The Prince of Shadows ·

Wow... You had me scared there for a while! I'm glad Fluttershy came and did her thing toward the end
I didn't find anything grammatical, nor anything spelling-wise, but some transitions were a bit rocky. Nothing a quick re-read with a fresh eye can't fix.. the story is pretty good the way it is. Nice piece!