Aloe comes home late from the spa to find her sister in a compromising position with a stallion.
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If that's the case, you should read my three clopfics, all involving Aloe/Lotus. And then there's the Spa Ponies group I made if you want more of them.
Anyway, loving this story so far.
3920349 I have read some of yours. They were good. I noticed them when I saw you were also doing a Spacest X Pegacest story
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Well, the incest only happens in the first story between the spa pony sisters. No incest between Flitter and Cloudchaser in the second story.
3926415 I saw that much. Still a good story though.
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Thanks for the advice! I just submitted another story, which I hope better deals with emotion and doesn't get trapped in repetitive phrasing. The thesaurus is a very useful tool.
I think I did all right for my first ever erotic fic, but I can see there's a lot of room for improvement. Hopefully my second try is better than my first.
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Excellent build up and finish.
Good enough solo act, yet maybe a sequel with both?
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I'll be honest, there is suppose to be a second chapter with the two of them, but at the moment it's down for very heavy revisions. It was an early attempt at clop of mine, and it wasn't very good.
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Maybe we get yet to see it one day
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That's the hope. I'm busy with other stuff, or else I'd have reposted it already.