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Dark Chocolate
Converting daydreams into stories helps me pretend to be human.
Dark Chocolate
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Ever wrote about two dragons having unrelenting, rough sex on the Cutie Map?
>title is "timecest adventure"
>No future FutaGlimmer fucking and impregnating her past self to give birth to her own clone who then get back to the past in the future to do it again.
Weak tbh.
I don't understand, I had a bunch of people favorite this, but no one cares to upvote?
7645465 It's odd, but I have seen it happen.
Maybe you should use Starlight(Past) and Starlight(Future) for this...It kinda get confuse who is who...
This was hot, sexy, and a little confusing, but I can still fall to it.
7645465 that's weird but I did both
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Yeah I tried to do it as the dominating Starlight is reffered to as Starlight, and the Starlight taking it is just "the mare"
7648131 Well it was still good and I knew who was who eventually.
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And I'm still confuse. So Dominant Starlight is past Starlight or future Starlight? =w="
7649007 they switch off between who is being dominate
I get the feeling that you have some confusion about what exactly a clitoris is. 'Cause that right there? That doesn't sound sexy; it sounds excruciatingly painful.
7681175 I know what it is, but for some reason I've had this weird issue where describing the actual vaginal canal has been...odd. For some reason when I say "clit" most people assume I'm implying the actual opening itself, and not the literal clitoris.
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Well yes, after wincing and crossing my legs I did assume that you were really referring to the vaginal entrance. But I also assumed that you're about as familiar with a vulva as I am with the Bucharest train system. If that's the image you wanna present then hey, more power to you.
I feel like this atm due to how fast you rushed this scene:
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I hope it goes a little slower as the fic progresses?
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Suddenly Starlight gets off to being spanked...okay then....um...okay then.
Okay, we're two paragraphs into Starlight going through the portal and I have NO CLUE where she is and only that she's getting off to having her flank smacked.... CONTEXT PLEASE!
And now we suddenly find her horny beyond all comprehension....all we need now is-
And there it is!
I am so beyond confused as to what the plot is or where Starlight even is at this point that this video is LITTERALLY my facial expression and what I am screaming right now:
As a sequel to "The buck-it" list which has a comprehensive plot despite being rushed, I can do nothing but facepalm at how lazily this was written.
I've seen you do better, show me this with your future works.
Now you're thinking with portals.
>vaginal shrinkage/aging (for months of anticipation purposes, not some freaky-ass Granny Smith stuff
terrified to find out what this means lol
The idea here is pretty amazing. The execution leaves much confusion. Anatomy lessons are needed.
That being said, it was still pretty damn hot.
Madness!
Thank you very much for the story, I really liked it
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I do not know why those who like it are silent, but please do not try to please everyone. The more explanations there are in the text, the more it will look like a swamp. Constant explanations are tiring.
If you decide to really please a crowd of confused people, then write in a personal account, I will tell you one idea.