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Twilight arrives in Ponyville to deliver a message from the Princess Celectia. However things do not go quite as planed. A dark version of the first episode in which the qualities of all of the characters have been skewed to a different aspect but not completely changed. Not yet completed, this is my first attempt at a fiction, comments and feedback greatly appreciated.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 16 )

craziiantics.files.wordpress.com/2011/03/aw-hell-naw.jpg (couldnt find one of twilight)
those bitches better let her and spike go or ima jump in that fic with my shotgun and an m16 and shoot them

593651
i guess you'll have to wait and see. soon :raritywink:

Somepony recommended this story to me. I'll give it a read later:rainbowwild:, but from the bit I did see, this looks intresting.:derpytongue2:

724835 Yes, yes you did.:trixieshiftleft:
It was wasn't it? The rest of his stories are pretty good too.:rainbowwild:

so she acpeted death and died oh poor old spike :'( i do like this maybe you could you go another story but inside this universe

730665
Thank you very much. Did she really die? After all the final part is titled assumed reality. Was it real to begin with? Did she die and go to the afterlife? Or did she change the entire world with her final magic.

731472 or did she take some of spikes weed and pinkies muffings?

I loved that. especially the very beginning and the end.

"You're going to love me..."
Really? XD

Oooh! Rarity Belle? Never thought of her like that.
...Hawt

Aww, that postscript was really nice.

1538040 Oh thank you so much, I hope to improve with my next one that im working on.

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