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DBP12012


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Cadance's past with the Crystal Empire is riddled with unanswered questions and well-kept secrets. No one truly knows how king Sombra came to power, except Cadance. Her past, however, is not something she is about to share with just anypony.

I don't have an editor, so it would be very helpful to let me know when you see an error.

EDIT: I was upset with how short the chapters turned out, so I made it a one-shot story instead.

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Comments ( 8 )

Nice story:twilightsmile: Keep writing. Just an idea for your next story:raritywink: maybe you should write Twilight's story.

Does this have a sequel or prequel? It was really good but some parts didn't make sense. It needs a little more backstory. It needs to start at the beginning of her story and explain everything.

4264091 There will be a sequel. It's in the works right now. :twilightsmile:

Phew, my confusion meter.

4828233 Yes, I know. My first attempt at writing FanFiction didn't go well. I realize it's terrible writing and stuff, so much so that I've scrapped the storyline. [I was going to do a whole set of one shots in this AU.] I'm not too proud of this one

'Crystal Secrets' huh? :rainbowhuh: I guess I'm okay with sharing my username with the name of a story. :raritywink:

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Not so sure if you would, my friend. Not the best fic to share a name with, tbh. :rainbowwild:

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