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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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Pinkie pie simulator 2020... I would stand outside walmart for a week for that!:rainbowwild:

4013793 I fear you would have to live up to the promis, the day it is announced this will be out.
I'd be holding a place in the line too, I'd imagine. who wouldn't?

Now I just hope this hologram will work, and actually make a good impersonation of her original self too.

I guess I just had to start with Pinkie Pie, for one, she likes to bake, and have all the fun Antics, who'd say no to these?

4013815 I'm pretty sure even if it's a pony, who can say no to a hologram that is like a human being walking around your house?:pinkiegasp:

Why is this not funded! !!!!

4013831 I guess I would take her happily, in which ever of the default forms here.
just to have her move around my home, and talk to me, not to mention all the tother fun she'd be.

4013924 'Funded', how do you mean, I'm afraid I'm confused here.

4013998 I guess it is in part, because I pick up any and everything, then makes it into a story.
Most of my stories here, I've written from the first of January.

There is likely to be an Apple Jack coming soon. As an Earth Pony, she would be the easiest to handle.
Now I just need a 'friend' who likes, or have a reason to have her around.
Preferably someone who has an apple tree on the yard.

only problem would be if you wanted to have her in your own home, since I can't see this product on the market any time soon.

from a story perspective, AJ would be just as easy to plug in, as Pinkie was.
The entire character is contained within a small USB plug, just like what we use for storing files for our PCs now.
Just in this case, it isn't for storing these files, or a modem, or any similiar, but a full character.

Ok, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one... :pinkiehappy:

4014145 I hope you'll enjoy what you see. make sure to let me know, if a next chapter takes too long.

4015444 I hope I can maintain the feeling there. :pinkiesick:
4015470 I guess I haven't red that story.
If it included romance, that should be something to look into.
Though I recall someone showing images of a comic sounding like 'Browsing Ponies', but is there any rellevance to that comic you're hinting at?

I like the story, but you should cool it on the exclamation marks, it seems unnatural to read.

4046790 "I'm using them to emphasis completion of a statement!"
"As opposed to the questions?"

did I place any of them in any situation, or missed one, where it should have been?

would be nice if you could elaborate.

I'm glad you enjoy the story as far as I've posted it.

Comment posted by nodamnbrakes deleted Jun 7th, 2014
Comment posted by kalash93 deleted Jun 7th, 2014

...... okay I will admit funny as heck here. I see the concept has taken a cue from the yugioh arc v anime. Apparently you can add mass to solid vision in that show. I saw similarity here. Wait does this concept include combining traits from two separate ponies or other equestrian species? That would mean that the spike and rarity versions might form a unique being. Great idea's are rushing through my mind here.

4511544 Since Pinkie Pie is around, I guess it is expected to be funny, fun and a fair portion of random.

Numerous shows have Holograms, I was actually trying to figure out if this could be marked a cross on this aspect, but couldn't figure what show it would be.

I never saw the show, but on second thought, I think I enjoyed some music from the show.

I haven't delved into mixing anything, more then making your favourit Holographic version of Characters out of the MLP(FiM).

Thewre may be room for even more special to unique characters along the line. I can't see anything preventing it. For now, the device can only handle a single character, but the options should still make for plenty of fun.

I have started to toy with the idea to make it the begining of a 'Holo-Verse', wherein even more fun could happen.

Thanks, your comment wams me up, in a time where I really do need it. I don't particularly enjoy deleting comments, but some just scream out to be removed.

Comment posted by OldSchoolCatholic deleted Jul 21st, 2014

what is this ???????

5130857 how do you mean?
could you specify a bit more?

4511544 Since you mentioned Rarity and spike, I have added a Sequal staring these two, with a few other friends featured.
The possibilities are quite vast on this scope, if one dares but explore where it could lead off to.

if that ever came out, put me down for a Twilight sparkle!

5267892 When they get this far in Holographic tech and programming, it is only a matter of who would launch them.

If this comes out, while I still am around, I sure would be looking out for my very own character right along with you and hordes of others.

I am sure your choice would be among the first to become available, since she is among the Mane six, after all.

Since there is bound to be a market, it is good someone launched the idea, I think.

Twilight Spatkle could be quite enjoyable a companion, even without her magic as in the show.
If these things does come all the way, I predict a booming sale for her, and Dr. Whooves.
For more practical needs, Rarity abd Apple Jack would be popular, even if some would love Pinkie Pie and Flutter Shy as well?

Some parts feel a little off when you read them and I spotted a few grammar and spelling errors but otherwise i'm liking this story so far. :scootangel:

Your grammar is still off and it makes it difficult to really get into the story. Take the first sentence for example.

Apparently, the Ponies does have soulful eyes. I guess it had surprised me, but I can't say I am disappointed.

I would change this to:

" Apparently, natural ponies do have soulful eyes. I guess I was expecting them to be dull and distant, can't say i'm disappointed."

The story needs more depth to draw the reader in. I've found that it's often hard to resist skimming over the story instead of reading it because there's little depth or detail. :scootangel:

Pinkie is really really out of character in this story. Also this chapter was sadly not very good. From the start it made little sense and nothing was adequately explained. :scootangel:

I'm going to have to stop reading here and give you a downvote. The plot of the story is good but the execution needs a lot of work. There's still no depth to the story or any real descriptions to hold my attention. The story is hollow and boring to read. If you gave it a good rewrite and fleshed it out more then this could be fantastic. :scootangel:

5407964 I still have some problems with these I am still working on.
If you could help me point out what bothered you, I could try to address the issues?

5407983 At least, this is an example of what you feel could have been done better. I will have to consider the exact implications of the changes in order to maintain the story as intended, but there are a few details I could see fairly early on a second thought.
Personally, I think you overdid the perception of ponies a bit.
If you have any more examples and suggestions as to how to address any issues you found, please let me know. PM me if you feel it more appropriate too.

5621348 Yeah, it is.
It seems as if it has stayed out of the loop a while longer then my comfort goes along with, though.
By the looks, it is one of my more popular stories.

5621729 In some ways, this is more than merely a story.
There are the seeds for all the sequels of an entire Sideverse in there.

Thanks for allerting me to the effect of how long this story has been left to its own devices.

5622086 I hope you don't go all desperate, then. Sadly, the majority of my stories are currently incomplete. with the few exceptions, that is.

The story is a gateway to numerous events and possibilities. Most of the restriction are put up in the beginning; the premise of the individual stories.

5622120 Then I need to explain all the inner workins and implement the intended ditails into the story.

Oh well, should be plenty of fun.

5622924 Actually, I don't know exactly how much of these details are right?

No loyer technicalities, or Twilight Techno babbles. (I'm not really into these anyway.

Still, the story needs more episodes and adventure to it. Not just pointing out how varios things work

On the other hoof, you could use that method against anyone you feel is a Troll, or the like?

5623052 That would depend on what kind of Trolls we are talking about.
The first is good for the candy trolls, while the other may work on the once you encounter on sites like this?

Finding and eating, may be interesting for Pinkie Pie too? *hint hint*
She is such an Excitable Pony.

5626133 Which of them would you have me not remind you, if not both?

5627091 I think I may love to see that comming to pass, just not being there, while you perform.

5627232 Ass I said, I don't need any further details.

The one detail that would be thrilling, is the highly timly dimice of certain individuals, of whos names should remain unknown.

This way, the further acts would be spared from ever be taken?

5628370 You don't need to know them.

Yet, they will be very intimate with your Crow-Bar. Well, wouldn't they?

Maybe not so much on a friendly level, but it will be a very intimate contact, wouldn't it?

Speaking of, I think I had a story on this subject, and with Pinkie and her lovely and lovable Pie.

Now, is that subject to inspiration for a new story?

5629864 *cheers* doesn't want to know them, anyways.

Crow-Bar, as in bar of crow? *tease tease* (Now, eat up.)

Inspiration is always good, for what ever ou have in mind.

Not all can be Writers. Maybe you are more of the reader, or performing something else cool?

5631990 That's great.

I guess they are cool, as Steel?

5633927 hmm, going by the mottow; Nuke them til they glow, and shoot them in the dark, I hear.

Well, they just may be Russians.

5634133 I guess a bar of Crow is the only meal they deserve?

The famous final meal of Trolls *tease tease*

5636112 I guess Crow is the traditional dish for Trolls?

Now conveniently available in Bars, just like chocolate and soap.

Chocolate is for your other half, while soap is for washing.

5636191 That's a minor set-back.

At least you knew who to give the crow all along.

5636260 Would have been really bad, if you gave the Crow to your other half and the cocolate o the Trolls *tease tease*

Speaking of chocolate, I neeed to dig up a large pile of candy for the next chapter. They have Nightmare Night, right about now.
The sun is about to go down. We all know what is about to happen after that, right?

5636274 Pinkie Pie loves her Chicken Suit.

I guess they will all die, eventuraly?

I doubt your Trolls findyour bar of Crow all that sweet *tease tease*

Speaking of Pinkie Pie, she will need to make herself a brand new suit, unless Rarity steps up and crafter it fo her?
I think she will go for a Dragon Suit, this time.

Scaring any and every one in site and ear shot, with the legendary Dragon Roars of her.

5638513 Ha Ha, I have a few stories, where she wear her mane flat too.
Just that certain other Ponies, Griffons orPeople were less then excited or enthusiastic about her inpromptu vissits.

I have a few ideas for a new story, where she is once more carrying her mane flat.

Pondering how Pinkie Pie would fair as an Astronaut, considering she already went Balistic once in Canon.

Pinkie Pie is constantly all over the place, doing this way and that. Then whatnot, just for the laugh.

I even had her crowned as Queen of a new Changeling Hive. Now, that's about to be a riot of laughter and a stampede coming up.

5638548 Well, at least the world, such as we knew it.

They have an invested interest in keeping her happy, thus will smile at all times.
They are also bound to keep the village and all her other friends happy.
Naturally, they will have to prepare for when the High Queen is feeling threatend enough to attack them as well.

Bewear the Pink Honour Guard *giggles*

5638593 She just happen o be a bit hard to find and stop.
For one, she has the antics on her side, knowing how to go places fast, as if she wasn't fast enough already?
In one, she has an Army of Clones under her Command as well.

Besides, she love to see smiles, and thus commanded the clones to Beam, Beam Beam ..

On the other hoof, she only ear Cakes and Pastries.

5638643 Naeh, Applejack is safe, quite safe, to be exact.

That part of Smile HD was never transfered into any of my stories.

Just like the Jedi of Star Wars, she is more for the style of a well crafted blade.
If the blade is actual Canon, or if Past sins, or any other invented that is all the same.
Although I guess her Canon can be used for multiple purposes?
I commonly prefer the decoration, but blowing out a door for distractional effects could be hilarious.

5638691 I doubt she is distracted, she blew out the door as a distraction.

Besides, you need to know whos door she blew out.
I doubt it was your best palls home. More likely a Troll lived and died there?
If she doesn't have the flash herself, it may have been Luna herself who tipped her of to go there in the first place.
According to the story, she picked up on someone who tried to stop the show, which is the same as Equicide on her end.
If killing him saves her village, who dare argue with her?

besides, shortly after that door was blown out, she is in another world, quite literally.
She is most likely selling Ditzy/Derpy the breakfast Muffin already.(Or if you prefer to call her BrightEyes)

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