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alCROWholic


I write TF stuff. Commissions are open, $20 for 1000 words.

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Well, I like where this is going,
Continue.:fluttershysad:

I hope that little sesion of one-sided fantasy in the shower was a one time deal:applejackunsure:

Otherwise great job, I shall be faving this for now:rainbowkiss:

Damn good work man. Keep it up! I need to see more of this.

Well, at least you're taking your time with this.
Proceed. :moustache:

I'll stick around for now, see how this plays out.

Okay, well this hits all the right notes for me, I'll admit.
1. Gilda
2. Jacked chicks. Proceed.

You have my attention.

I think I'm ready for this ride... no.. I KNOW I'm ready!

flashsentry a dick and humiliated sweet pluse amozon chicks dubel fuck ya

...oh yes. She can certainly do all those things to me.

And I wouldn't be reluctant either.

My body is ready

My Gilda fanboy sense is tingling. I must read! :twilightblush: :applejackconfused:

It feels like Gilda is somewhat okay with the nameless-OC-that-needs-a-name looking at her form. though she found his reaction to looking somewhat amusing. after all, maybe she sees something in him, maybe herself, an old friend. she might even not think of him in that way. it could be bad either way; a teacher, to be or not, can't get involved with their students. i will watch more of this story.

My body is ready, bring on the clop!

now if Brad wasn't a meat-head, I'd say he was cleverly scheming. But we all know thar he's under the control of his south head and that's his motivation

My body is ready, but my mind was not :raritycry:

U forgot to put slice of life too. This shit can happen in real life

What an excruciatingly awesome idea.

First humanized story I like. Good job.

mooooooooaaaaaaaaaaar

plz

ok this really needs another chapter please.:ajsmug:

...she can sit on my face any time she likes!

4259208
4259244 8th! It's supposed to be third.... but 3 isn't perfectly symmetrical!

Well shit, that was spontaneous.

sweet:pinkiehappy: though I wish this updated more often:unsuresweetie:

... :applejackconfused: I don't exactly know how to feel about this... On one hand, this is cutting dangerously close to "Rape isn't rape if you enjoy it" argument... On the other hand, seem to be putting the effort to show that both characters are confused about what just happened, without cramming it down the reader's throat... Eh, moral issues aside, this is some very good writing, both in the smut and the character development. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Ya that was a bit straight forward but we are talking about gilda so its doable...

thanks for the chapter as all ways keep it up! :eeyup:

"next time return the favor" I love that line:rainbowlaugh:

Nice nice, though that last line did not really feel in character... though I suppose it did because you wrote the character... oke it did not fall into what I hoped the character was :derpytongue2:

The story is good so far, but my biggest turn off is the use of barley... It's spelled barely. Barley is a cereal grain.

Okay... when are they gonna have sex? I want to know, I like GildaXHuman stories.

as mythed if

as miffed if

You squirm slightly but her one of her strong arms as a vice grip over your chest, preventing you from escaping

..what? Did you mean something like;
You squirm slightly but one of her strong arms acts as a vice grip over your chest, preventing you from escaping

Coming in here along and vulnerable

Coming in here alone and vulnerable

so you simple roll your slightly on your mounds and drool slightly.

...I got nothing on that one, but it's not right,

You mead and squeeze

Mead? KNEAD.

And there we have it, sex with her at last! Can't wait for the next training session!

awesome:pinkiehappy: very well written:moustache:

Do "The king and i" fic. :ajbemused:

Awesome chapter once again, though I'm pretty sure that the chair changed from metal to wood. I swear, it's those damn alchemist messing with the stories again....

What does "tko" mean?:rainbowhuh:

Hey, I wouldn't mind if Gilda did that to me.

I wish Brad wasn't in this story

Also
“Do it kid, breed me like the bitch I am!”
Looks like we just discovered one of Gilda's fetishes, better than the sweaty feet story by a mile.

When may we have more? :pinkiehappy:

4755697 i agree when is the next update?

4856278 To be honest I don't have a schedule for releasing chapters for this story. I'll think about it after I write another chapter for the king and I. ;D

4856506 thanks ill keep an eye out for the next chapter for that story then.

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