Commander Bolt, Commander of Nightmare Moon’s armies and once the most feared pony in Equestria, has returned but now he only wishes to live in peace as a lowly wonderer, hear his aftermath, from the ponies he meets in his travels.
Ever wonder what would happen if a demon showed up in the world of Equestria? No? Well, too bad! Cause we got a mad scientist one who's obssessed with heroes now running about this world!
After being granted a wish by Princess Luna, Rainbow Dash becomes the single strongest, most muscular mare in all of Equestria. Will it be enough to finally make her father, a world champion strongpony, proud of her?
curious story, not bad, but not the best i've read, keep up the good work. and well it wasn't as funny as i'd hoped, but i was thinking on the friendship is magic b!tch flash, so it didn't take me by surprise
Not gonna lie that made my sides hurt with laughter. Bravo
That was...EPIC!!!
FIRST I WAS
THEN I WAS
AFTER THAT I WAS
NOW I'M ALL
Also PINKIE ROCKET FOR THE WIN!!!
Not bad. Kinda funny.
wut
At first I was
But then I
[img]fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/235/5/5/free_space_core_icon_2_by_urnam7-d47mtq8.gif[/img]SSSPPPAAACCCEEE!!!!
Oh Trollestia, up to your old tricks again, I see, well done sir
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curious story, not bad, but not the best i've read, keep up the good work.
and well it wasn't as funny as i'd hoped, but i was thinking on the friendship is magic b!tch flash, so it didn't take me by surprise
Very excellent story I give it 5 out of 5 moustaches and a trollestia oh and a facehoof
I approve. I definitely approve.
Not bad. Is it complete? It's stated to be incomplete yet what you have sounds like it ended.
friendship is magic bitch, portal 2, minecraft, and ponies in one fic?
HUZZAH! THE AWESOMENESS HAS BEEN QUADRUPLED, AND THE MUSTACHES HAVE BEEN QUINTUPLED!
You get the following:
3/3
4/5
10/5
and a bonus (extra credit)
pony-aperture science was then formed, and then failed from rust in ten days.
Wow! Thanks everypony!!! I really appreciate it!
OH GOD DUDE!... YOU MADE ME BUST A GUT! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!! BAHAHAHAHHAAHH!!!