Meet John Smith, average guy, average life that has just taken a turn for the worse. He just got fired from his job and now his land lord is out to kill him. He gets trapped in a dark alley, where Princess Celestia comes to save him. Celestia defeats the land lord and his goons. But the land lord gets up and tries to shoot Princess Celestia, but John jumps in front of the Bullet, sacrificing himself to save Princess Celestia. Princess Celestia brings him back to life, but only temporarily. He is given a choice, die on earth, or live in Equestria, but as an Infant. He chooses to go to Equestria, and Princess Celestia takes him in
Awesome start
4108646 Thanks
I will watch this with great interest. Very well done.
4109000 Thank you.
Hmmm very interesting thus could be good can't wait.
4110478 the next chapter is being writen as we speak.
4110499 my question now id he gonna live with twilight or with her ' rents
4110512 'Rents?
4110513 her parents
4110517 You'll see, the next chapter is going to be longer, so it'll most likely be posted tomorrow.
well, it's an okay start, but why was Celestia in our dimension, why would the land lord murder people fro not getting him rent when he could just evict him, and why does he have to be turned back into an infant, it has confused me a bit, but i will continue to read
4120999 All will become clear soon.
4132458 I expected nothing less
what did he realize? what gave him dejavu?
4146308 Doctor Who, Day of the Doctor: when The Doctor takes the potion on caan and Regenerates into the war Doctor.
Christ... I'm thinking back on this and cringing so hard... What the hell was I thinking?
When is the next update?
8463465
Probably never.