Hello, Im Dark Luna Moon! And I will be writing lots of stories over the next few months! Enjoy
The Alicorn Princess Luna has once again begun her transformation into Nightmare Moon. Luna tries to fight back, but succeeding is harder than she thought....
My first actually published story, yes the chapters are relatively short, but advice is appreciated!
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I hope you all like this. Because this is my very first Fimfiction, and I'm trying to make the best out of it!
Comments and advice is appreciated!
I will put it in my read later. Liked and followed
Yay! First comment!
Meh, not really interested. Sorry. I just don't like stories with 300 or something words per chapter.
And, oh, crap... My avatar is taken already...
Sorry i just really liked the Pic foudn it on google, XD
Ill change it
thats fine, its my first story you know, cant have everyone liking them.
The song Video Games by SimGretina helped me write the last chapter, who knows how.... XD
We'll other than the chapters being so short this ounds like an interesting story, but it could be so much better. I see so many better ways to writte a few things(sentences) even better than they are now though
. If you ever need/would be interested in an editor/pre reader thing, to help with this story pm me. 
Yes, well this story is far from perfection, but it's also my first fimfiction, and thanks for the advice, I'd be happy to get more!