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Grenazers


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no bad. not bad at all.

I take the pictures as a warning so as not to read it.

4139571
Um thanks for the comment?

But I read it anyway, great porn, bad end. D:

You need to revise this. There are so many errors...

4140480
Yeah, I might do that sometime in the near future.

4139846
Well it is to be expected. All those nights together, she was just savoring her meal until she was bored with him.

4139784
I would feel bad for he but he dead living a men dream deaf by sex so it 50/50 but i like the story:heart:

I guess you could say that Chrysalis has complicated relationships with her "sources". Though, one does wonder if she released him/ banished him from the kingdom or if he became a husk all the same. The ending is quite... dissatisfying to be honest.

But still, it was a good clopfic. 7.5/10:rainbowkiss:

Nice twist at the end.


~OreoKookie

an all right read the end seemed to be a bit rushed thought all and all not bad for an OCxChryslis clop.

:facehoof: really missed with the ending but the rest was good so... ya

that ending got dark

stay classy:moustache:

Now that’s what I call death by snew snew




Oh heavens I hope I spelled that right

This was a great clopfic I probably would of liked if he lived but Oh well it's a great fic so I'll give it a 9/10

“Yes, my Queen.” The maid know as Chitin, walked to the bed and eyed the stallion. The poor fellow was withered husk, a shadow of his former self. His body was lifeless and his eyes stared at nothing. Closing his eyes with her hand, the changeling maid lifted the pony over her shoulder and carried him out of the room.

Because of that part you need to add the Death tag to this story.

Tag your stories correctly so people's blacklists can work properly. And so that those who complain about what they don't want to see without using the blacklist have nothing but themselves to blame.

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