Twilight woke up in the middle of the night.
She went down to grab a glass of milk.
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The Watcher 509
Music "enthusiast", a weirdly nice guy to talk to, has a hat rack, active imagination yet weak at applying it into words, tries to do things while "in the moment" and not thinkthings through.
The Watcher 509
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Hm. You've caught my attention.
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In what way?
Moar.
4173644 Because I hadn't anticipated the ending.
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It's just the dream... or is it!?
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I seriously don't know where to go from here
4173687 It feels unfinished.
"TWILIGHT!"
"space.. time... emergency... come quick!"
Twi-Cube's greatest hit.
Hmm...
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The story is good, but I would have closed it when Twilight falls asleep again. That last partial scene was just confusing, as it breaks the sense of finality given by how Twilight keeps thinking about her friends in past tense.
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Thanks for the thoughts on the story. I guess I still need some practise on these kinds of stories. I'm just glad that someone thought of this little experiment as "good". I'll certainly try my best next time I try to write a sadfic, and until we meet again...
Have a nice day
-The Watcher 509