Mood Swings

by Swimmingly

Day 958: Recovery

The past two years had been like none she had ever experienced, her friends upon discovering her condition vowed to help her deal with it.

They certainly had never broken thaht promise.
The medications were helping too; she rarely had a full mood episode, mostly just minor episodes which were easily managed.

For the first few months she had desperately wished things could return to how they were.
But this never happened.
As the days turned to months and years, she embraced her new life.

She realised that sometimes the only way to go forward is to take a left turn.

And she was so glad she did.

Comments

[fanficbossgirls]

omigod. write a fricking sequel

[fanficbossgirls]

IT WOULD BE AWESOME IF YOU WERE TO WRITE A SEQUEL

[fanficbossgirls]

-MIDNIGHT BREEZE

[fanficbossgirls]

WRITE A FRICKING SEQUEL ALREDY

[Swimmingly]

4233272 I take it you want me to write a sequel.

[DismantledAccount]

You have some rather glaring grammatical errors that need to be cleaned up. And quite honestly, the story was too short, for me.
I'm not really sure how I want to leave this story. I'm really not. I think I'll just pass on a vote. It wasn't bad and I don't want to downvote it, but I don't know if I want to upvote it either.

Regardless, good luck with your future writing endeavors. You've got some talent in there somewhere--I can see it; you just have to hone it a bit.

P.S. And try looking for an editor. If you find a good one, he can really help with the quality of your story, and not just grammar, either.

[Swimmingly]

4235054 thank you for your time and your feed back, I am well aware of my flaws in punctuation and grammar. I will go over it again to correct my errors. Simply put im not very good at typing.

Once again thank you for your feedback.

-Swimmngly

[DismantledAccount]

4235200

Simply put im not very good at typing.

I'll give you a hint: neither am I. I suck. But the secret is pouring over each sentence--word by grueling word--multiple times before you publish the story/chapter (well, and spellcheck ). Like, in one chapter, you only capitalized names half the time. I can see that you know to capitalize names, because you did it elsewhere, but you need to read what you have written.

No problem, and good luck. And if you have any in-depth or technical questions to help you on your way, feel free to send me a PM; I'd be happy to help.

[fanficbossgirls]

4234491 really i dont think thats was i was implying

[pegabeats]

Awesome! Some of the grammer was off, but the shortness of it wasn't a problem! I sometimes need a PERFECT story for how I'm feeling. I foooooouuuuuund it!!!!!!
(My words when seeing this story)

[Swimmingly]

4316493 thank you very much, it means a lot to me to hear that you enjoyed my story.