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Your whole Life Changes In a Cartoon Movie.The Cartoon movie Is MLP.You Watched your Programma Lats night but Then you get black out when a flits Light came into your Tv Screen.You woke Up in ponyville.You was no Human anymore, You was Your Own MLP Character.You got Every Piece of Body What a pony got.But sowly when you Walked through Ponyville. You meet your Fav MLP Character in Your own eyes!


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Comment posted by Garnet Shield deleted Apr 17th, 2014

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How did this even get ON FIMFiction?

This is so fucking good, no joke. Please keep purposely writing like a shit faced drunk, this is amazing!

What did you write this with? There are random capitalisations everywhere. The idea's okay, but it's so fast paced I tripped over my eyelids trying to read it. Aside from the grammar, the content seems fine. Keep it up. :rainbowwild:

P.S I recommend using a word document or proofing it before publishing in future. Hope I haven't sounded like a hater. Sorry. :applecry:

We get signal.
For great Justice. Take off every Zig!

4249430 Somebody set up us the bomb!

I'm pretty sure you have a good idea for this story...but please learn how to write in English.

Rated 10/10 by Onyx1998 for butchering the English language.

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Maybe he lives in a swamp.

Where the hell is my second chapter?!

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