Your whole Life Changes In a Cartoon Movie.The Cartoon movie Is MLP.You Watched your Programma Lats night but Then you get black out when a flits Light came into your Tv Screen.You woke Up in ponyville.You was no Human anymore, You was Your Own MLP Character.You got Every Piece of Body What a pony got.But sowly when you Walked through Ponyville. You meet your Fav MLP Character in Your own eyes!
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How did this even get ON FIMFiction?
This is so fucking good, no joke. Please keep purposely writing like a shit faced drunk, this is amazing!
What did you write this with? There are random capitalisations everywhere. The idea's okay, but it's so fast paced I tripped over my eyelids trying to read it. Aside from the grammar, the content seems fine. Keep it up.
P.S I recommend using a word document or proofing it before publishing in future. Hope I haven't sounded like a hater. Sorry.
We get signal.
For great Justice. Take off every Zig!
4249430 Somebody set up us the bomb!
I'm pretty sure you have a good idea for this story...but please learn how to write in English.
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Rated 10/10 by Onyx1998 for butchering the English language.
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Maybe he lives in a swamp.
Where the hell is my second chapter?!
.........Did i just read this crap ?. 31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4hqe2T4Kw1r3k1m8o1_500.png