Three short years after the event of Luna's heat. Anothony decides he'd like to stay in Equestria with Luna. After having a couple of talks and agreements with Luna's sister, Celestia, they allow him to stay in Equestria.
I have to say that was a good chapter. I am glad that Luna found her special someone. You have a good start for the story. I do like Slice of life storys. what happens next? It seems that Anthony has a bad pass that he don't like to remember. Maybe that why he can understand Luna so well. I like to know where are the gard's that are supposed to gard Princess Celestia and Luna? Anthony mite git shot by a gard if they find him before Celestia can tell them that he belongs hear. How are the ponys going to take to a human?
It well be fun to see how this story plays out. I think that you need to add more framework to the story to help it flow better. Are you going to bring in the mane 6 to the story the Elements of harmony? Or is Luna afraid of them? Good luck and keep up the good work you are doing.
4275049 Sure, why not?
I have to say that was a good chapter. I am glad that Luna found her special someone. You have a good start for the story. I do like Slice of life storys. what happens next? It seems that Anthony has a bad pass that he don't like to remember. Maybe that why he can understand Luna so well. I like to know where are the gard's that are supposed to gard Princess Celestia and Luna? Anthony mite git shot by a gard if they find him before Celestia can tell them that he belongs hear. How are the ponys going to take to a human?
It well be fun to see how this story plays out. I think that you need to add more framework to the story to help it flow better. Are you going to bring in the mane 6 to the story the Elements of harmony? Or is Luna afraid of them? Good luck and keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
Awsome job
I think you shod of dragged out the secret behind his necklace but otherwise this chapter was good
the entire necklace bit just had me playing the 'exposition' song from the nostalgia critic in my mind.
not bad
Not bad, but where's her accent? Even without the RCV she still talks with an old English accent.
4276268 Your avatar is absolutely adorable. Love newyorkx3's art
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You mean that garbage that appears to have been drawn with a crayola crayon?
4280887 Whatever you think, man.
4278869 Is that a bad thing?