Sky, earth, and in between / Come watch with me as our world burns
It's been twenty years since Rarity was last conscious. Ponyville has been leveled, and Rarity is only now waking up. Of all her friends, only Fluttershy remains in her home. The stoic faces of the Royal Guard have been replaced by uniformed soldiers, and a pillar of smoke rises over the horizon.
With nothing but each other, Rarity and Fluttershy are left to search Equestria for their friends, and to discover what force has managed to so deftly rebuild Equestria in its image.
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Interesting. It's not necessarily an original idea (28 Days Later did it best, in my opinion), but this could be very interesting.
Wow! This is really good. I'm eager to find out what happens next!
Woohoo, Rara main characta.
(yes, that was bad on purpose)
Twilight zone,
Looks like ol Spikey wikey had a case of the Chili pepper gas attack.
Ooohhh I really want to know what happened to Equestria.
Hell, I'll be glad with finding out what happened to the others
I'm glad that this fic is still going. Anyway, that was a wonderful chapter with many mysteries waiting to be solved and the characters were all great in my opinion. Nice work!
Very interesting. It's still a really bad idea to take that food without asking though. Dragon instincts being what they are, you don't wave a red flag at a bull, even if that bull is a good friend.
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Name of Story: Score
Grammar: 9/10 I only saw a few minor errors
Pros:
* Your word usage in describing the situation or an object is great( wish I was that good...)
*I'm so glad you didn't have Rarity go ballistic when she discovered the layers of dust... I find that her over dramatizing everything to be grating...
Cons:
*I expected more reaction from the ponies when they discovered the destruction. this is where over dramatizing rarity might have been okay.
*I do find it a bit odd that Spikes dragon instincts didn't warn him about the stolen spinach...
* 20 years of napping and some how Spike is now an adult and in his 100 year nap... OOOOkay...
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Its still a wonderful story I have fav'd it.
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