A Perfectly Good Night's Rest

The Elements of Harmony have gone through many adventures, saving Equestria a great number of times. Together, they can accomplish many tasks placed ahead of them.

That is, except for their newest idea: Sharing a bed together.

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Eddy13

Eddy13 #1 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · · ·

That was very funny. Poor Rarity. Still, as a FlutterDash shipper, I would've preferred if Fluttershy was being cuddled by Rainbow Dash instead of Pinkie Pie. Still, I guess Dash had to be the one to drool on Rarity. Incidentally though, I've had thoughts about writing a slumber party tale where Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy ended up in the same situation Applejack and Rarity were in, except they don't complain about it.

Derpator

Derpator #2 · Jun 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

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I kept getting tempted at points to turn this into a shipping story, at which point it would have just become either a big open relationship, or a pair the spares story. I think it works better without it, because let's be honest, we all love cuddles. Ever since Sleepless in Ponyville, I've always seen Rainbow Dash as one of those sleepers, so it was a pretty clear choice to use Dash as the catalyst.

I'll agree though. Poor Rarity.

Tennis Match Fan

Tennis Match Fan #3 · Jun 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

I'd love to see an animation of this, with the Mane Six piles on top of one another.

scoots2

scoots2 #4 · Jul 7th, 2014 · · ·

4585759 I prefer it this way, too--and it fits well with A Persistent Dash.

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #5 · Oct 10th, 2014 · · ·

You get sweaty when you sleep, just wash it off in the morning. Also, are they couples or just using the cuddle buddy system?

Derpator

Derpator #6 · Oct 10th, 2014 · 3 · ·

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Cuddle buddy system, because cuddles are magic.

UnlicensedBrony

UnlicensedBrony #7 · Nov 1st, 2015 · · ·

Love it. Snuggle pairs - so cute (Well written, too! I like your style. Following, and will check out some of your other stories when I get the chance )

Derpator

Derpator #8 · Nov 9th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Though I've only read one of your stories, I'm quite honoured. I know of some of your stories and how much of an impact some folk have said about them. It kind of feels like Cloudy Skies suddenly arrived and followed me, to put it another way. I'm glad you enjoyed this; it's probably one of my better fics, or at least one I'm more proud of. It was also written on a bit of a whim, and just devolved as I went along.

I consider myself quite better than how I was back when I wrote this and my other stories, but I haven't released any stories in over a year. I've lost a bit of motivation recently, and have struggled to keep at a single story and actually finish it. That, and I found my prose has turned minimalistic, which I am really hating. And to top it off, I have to devote quite some time to the final year of my studies, and I recently got back into anime, so I'm constantly getting distracted and interested elsewhere. I hope to push something out before Christmas, but I'm not making any promises, and I can't ever say when I'll release anything.

Still, I really appreciate the read and follow. Makes me regret not going to the con in October, because I totally could have met you.

UnlicensedBrony

UnlicensedBrony #9 · Nov 9th, 2015 · · ·

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It kind of feels like Cloudy Skies suddenly arrived and followed me, to put it another way.

Since Cloudy Skies is the most awesome fanfic writer ever, I am extremely honoured by that compliment

I haven't released any stories in over a year. I've lost a bit of motivation recently, and have struggled to keep at a single story and actually finish it. That, and I found my prose has turned minimalistic, which I am really hating.

I went through exactly the same thing recently - minimalistic prose included (how does that happen? I guess it's just being of practise, but it's still weird to feel like your style has up and vanished) - and I've only just managed to get back into writing regularly. I also haven't released anything substantial for over a year so I definitely know the feeling.

If you're busy with other things (especially studying) then try not to worry about it, and just practise when you can find the motivation - it'll all come back to you eventually

It would've been cool to have met you, too. I'm planning to go to next year's Ponycon as well, depending on location. If you get the chance, I can definitely recommend it

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