Celestia receives a poem in the mail, it helps her remember the morals she preaches.
I enjoy making entire worlds from the ground up. I don't create to give people morals, or subtle political opinions, I create to give experiences people would otherwise not have.
Celestia receives a poem in the mail, it helps her remember the morals she preaches.
I really like this. It leaves the ending open, yet it's fairly clear what's going to happen. Towards the end of the poem the rhythm started to get off, but it told the story just the same. Have a like.
Sorry for any early readers, I forgot to set the status to complete. So this is the entire story.
I like this. It's short, sweet, and to the point. It's not earth-shattering, but then stories like these don't need to be.
I wish you would continue it, though I certainly respect your decision to mark it complete; it could be a short epilogue of a happy reunion, or a multi-chapter story detailing the problem of their relationship in a hostile society.
Nevertheless, have a thumbs up.
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I do have some idea's for if I were continue it. However I would like to finish the other story I am working on before another multi-chapter project.
I normally don't care for poetry, but that was a nice short story
That was nice. The end was left open, but I'm sure the guard was released.