Equestria, land of magic and harmony. Where the three pony races co-exist in peace, ruled over by their benevolent princess. With their ultimate weapons, the elements of harmony, they have vanished many a foe, while others were reformed and now reside in said land.
Enter a being who does whatever they want, whenever they want, views logic as a suggestive guideline, outright breaks physics, and can perform impressive magical feats, when they can be bothered, and dresses in bright colours, the perfect camouflage for ponies. How will the ponies respond to such a being? Most likely with minor annoyance at their inane antics and national scale pranks.
Chapters (3)
I think this is good my fine fellow.
4635859 Think the way it deals with the big reveal is both original and good?
Why would you need a greenlight? It's not a costume obviously, go on and add it, every single story counts!
4635914 I meant does it qualify as human acting villainous? Since the only mean thing they've done so far is call Celestia fat, and then compliment her on weight loss.
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I think it's okay, you just have to be a little more descriptive and original.
4635949 I'll be more original next chapter, so should I submit it as is?
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There are a few typos changing the meanings of words, you should check them out. Mostly the fat part.
4635960 I didn't spell it fact did I? Because I've done that before.
4635960 I used only instead of old. Shame on me.
Does the nope-teleport make engineer yells of nope?
4653647 I don't see why not.
.......... God dammit I wish this character could cross over into my fic. Its not an MLP one but the omnipotent being is Gravity, who is subsequently a bitch. It would be funny to See Gravity and Jenny chat, rather, one antagonizing the other while the other is just scewing around with the one. Either way it isnt going to be so soon for such an event as Gravity and her bitchiness has yet to be revealed.
'lost' I should thank
'More cabbages' bwahahahaha loving this so far thanks for writing
didja mean party?
4654749 4654823 Not proofread. Was gonna reply with a spongebob picture, but I couldn't be assed.
Hilariously badly written, nails the random charm. Needs more views.
Seriously, if this fic didn't aim to have a random based character, it would be tossed aside without second thought. With a char like that though...
Go nuts!
4660381 Logic Manipulation as a power pre-mandates a character that has no rhyme nor reason as a base, otherwise the levels of power they possessed would be infinite. After all, how does stand up against a sane being that can manipulate logic? Answer, you don't.
awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job
Well this is definitely going to be a fun ride.
Those powers man, those powers. Dear Lord. I have yet to even put down a single word for mine
UWotM8?
lol this is pretty funny stuff