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Filler


Pony should pony pony.

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This is quality work. I congradulate you for a good story.

Oh, this will NOT stand. Carrot Top, you go right to Fluttershy and tell her that Angel's relatives have become BAD BUNNIES!

Then, Carrot Top, you write a letter to Princess Luna (this criminal activity, happening at night, falls under her jurisdiction). Bring the letter to Twilight to have Spike send it via Princess Celestia.

And then, just sit back and watch Mister Seed truly reap what he has sown.

My, what a sneaky pony. I certainly wasn't expecting that. Poor Carrot Top.

Interesting but it fell a little flat for me. There's no real explanation of Seed's motivation or even much on Carrot Top after she finds out the secret. An interesting idea but I think it'd be better with some more fleshing out.:twilightsheepish:

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