Not surprised. Twilight is really corrupted.

My body is ready

Please have a chapter show casing all their punishments, I want to see them suffer....ok not really but I'm a fan of Grimdark and I'm afraid she might come out of the computer and break me *pulls out a little flag with her cutie mark on it* all hail Queen Twilight

yeah me your first mention of my favorite character and she gets raped by my least favorite. I can't help but think this is some sort of ironic twist.

5124961 That's basically what part 2 is, a chapter for each of them getting punished.

5141221 Fantastic closing line for this chapter.

you are a fucked up excuse for a human please go jump off a cliff preferably one with really sharp rocks at the bottom of it

why the hell call this a "MIND CONTROL" story when she's just torturing people into doing what she wants?

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He probably doesnt want to write it, buit when you get an idea no matter how sickening it bugs you unitl you write it.

Takes out shotgun m870 "guess I'll have to kill some purple bitches".

Please tell me what evil is making me read this and like it!

Kotor511 lol i thought on a 50. Cal sniper but WHATEVURseason 5 is officialy dead...

I'm feel bad for pinkie pie apple jack and rarity because I actually know what is happens next in the story!

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Same thing for trixie because she didn’t get a second chance.

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I mean it is mind control story. Yes torture would break someone in real life.