Celestia's kingdom of Equestria has been blown apart. Or so it seems. Her journey is accompanied by a special draconeqeus who seems to have completely let go of his villainous past. Perhaps she has been taken to this bare land by a villain. But... who?
Messed up the italics close tag. Regardless, looks promising.
4782255 I know, I tried to fix it but I can't.. it works on WCRPG but not here... thank you for the feedback!
(Edit- fixed! Thanks.)
You forgot to add genre tags.
Dispite it looking rough with some format and grammar issues (to which it's easily fixable), I will agree with Saakra say that it has potential as long as it doesn't fall into something very, very, very cliched.
Thanks everyone! I am working on it. I appreciate the advice. This IS my first story afterall.
when comes the next chapter??
5002261 to be honest, I've been asking myself the same. I have no school tomorrow, so maybe by tomorrow.
Yay! It's back
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so youre going to continue or not ? :(