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Down on her luck, The Great and Powerful Trixie contemplates on what to do with her broken life. Thoughts of the happy past reminds her that she can still return to square one and try again. Possible strong sentimentality, click at your own discretion.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )
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This is a very nice story.
Good work.
-Fin

I cried manly tears at the end. Well written and ending every chapter with home was a nice touch. :fluttercry:

A very sweet story, here. Trixie... complex, yet simple. Foreground pony that's captured a lot of brony's interest. And I think you did a wonderful job here. Is there more to this story? More works from this little corner of the fandom?

Such a great story; I love it! :yay:

This was a beautiful story. I love how everything flowed from Trixie thoughts and fears of going home to her actually arriving and being accepted back into the fold.
A great story indeed.:twilightsmile::yay:

Present tense stories are a little strange to read considering the general lack of them. There is of course nothing wrong with writing in that fashion, but I had come across a few hiccups in the style, along with the usual errors that basically show up in everyone's work. Overall a pretty decent way of looking at Trixie that goes again the standard of what I've read.

I welcome and demand strong sentimentality :pinkiesad2:
Have at thee, manly tears!

This is pretty good. Only read the first chapter so far, but it's pretty awesome. I could totally see this being an episode, or part of an 'origins of' thing. Good work.:pinkiehappy:

Finished. Awesome job, a fantastic story with many feels to it. Excellent!:yay:

I remember reading this one on Fanfiction.net but I was never able to get logged in to make a comment. This was a beautiful and very heartfelt story. I'm glad to see Trixie have a positive ending. :twilightsmile:

I LOVED IT !!!! VERY WELL DONE !!!! THE FEELS WERE AWESOME !!!! I know it can be hard to return, after leaving under regretful circumstances.

I don't know why there aren't more comments on this story. It's amazing.

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