The Cutie Mark Crusader's have sleepover in Carousel Boutique talking about colts they have crushes on, the latest gossip, more ways to try to get their cutie marks, and pranks?
It's just a sleepover, The Cutie Mark Crusader way.
Just some random person on the internet that writes stories about a show with ponies. I try not to suck at writing. Am I good at it? I don't know. I just do it for fun.
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Thank god this is friendshipping. Anything around FiMFiction having to do with sleepovers always get alittle 'carried away'
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Anywho, I love it. Everypony is acting as they should be and this has alot of room for potential.
So I take it you found an editor?
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Yeah.
Haha! This is adorable. You did a good job with keeping The Crusaders in character. Very well done.
Cute, but it does awfully seem to make them obsessed with "Generic Girl Things," instead of adventure and cutie marks. Not all seven year old girls are obsessed with boys, you know. And I REJECT the idea that Scoot would pick anything but dare. It's downright out of character! Her special talent is extremity!
How can Rarity "ground" her little sister who does not live with her? Shouldn't she have just told her parents and had them discipline Sweetie? Why does Sweetie have her own room at Rarity's house?
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...I was obsessed with boys when I was seven...maybe I was the only the one....
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Sweetie stays at Rarity's a lot. I just figured she would have her own room.
Fuuuuuuaaaaarrrrkkkk (It mean's something is awesome or something awesome is happening)
What the hay just happened? Why did she get grounded... what is this? I don't even
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It's your story, but in "Sisterhooves Social" she brings about 20 suitcases full of stuff in order to stay a week. It doesn't seem like she keeps a lot of things at Rarity's. Also, that is in fact the only episode where she ever stays overnight, and Rarity makes it sound like a rather terrifying prospect. (They were going to have a sleepover in "The Stare Master," but it was relocated). It still seems a bit odd that Rarity would be disciplining her sister. How can she prevent Sweetie from having sleepovers ... when Sweetie does not live at the boutique? Best not think about it too hard, I suppose.
Sounds cute. I'll have to give it a read in my free time.
Befor I read this, that pic: fucking pricless.
and its good to see some people still have respect for the core of MLP
It seems like FIMfiction is slowly turning into a waistland of clop
The people that wright all the clop: they are the reasion why Bronies are not recognised Manestreem like the Poke'mon fans or the (dear god kill me for mentioning this one) the Sponge Bob fandom
then agen, spongebob's fandom isn't nearly as rabid as MLP's
Amazed that this story is not sexual, just by looking at the title i thought it was. Just see to damn many of those.
Nice story by the way.
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...I didn't know the word sleepover meant that to some fans....
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sadly, it dose
I have "view mature content" on because once in a while you do get a realy got fic thats marked as "M" for one reasion or another, yet now I need to waddle throught clopfic after clopfic.
it despars me to see the asshole of the fandom at it's work.
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What do you mean why did she get grounded? She wrote on her sisters face with a marker. That woulda been brawl between me & my sister. She's lucky Rarity's nice and stable.
490410 but... Rarity just said she wasn't going to ground her, then it looks like Sweetiebelle asked her to ground her.
Liked it! especially the line "There isn't a cutie mark for arguing” and Scootaloo standing up for Dinky. There needs to be more anti-bully stuff in MLP.
Thank the gods this wasn’t what I thought it would be
This was a very cute story. But I can't believe so many people seemed to think it was going to be a clop fic just because of the word "sleepover".
And if the raunchy clops fics are running rampant, it's no wonder people are enjoying my tastefully done romance story.
Cute Story. Faved for CMC awesomeness
now Sweetie Belle is going to get a cutie mark in responsibility?
"Cutie Mark for arguing"
4chan!
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Or being a lawyer
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Running for any political office.
Adorable. This reminds me of sleepovers I had when I was their age.
One thing: I find it hard to imagine that Scootaloo would pick Truth instead of Dare.