What fills and soothes the soul will vary, but for me, I will not know until I try.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders have dealt with their fair share of pranks, both giving and receiving. It's fun to dish out the pranks and receiving them can be taken in stride. There are times when pranks can go too far on the receiving end however.
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suspense
Five to six days per chapter? They better not be short chapters like this one then, seriously!
Interesting
Oh no..this it bad.
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I'll try to draw them out a bit more.
I have the outline of the story, so I'll be adding, subtracting, and modifying elements. This first part took me some time and went through a complete revision before I pushed it out.
That was fun. Waiting is always the hardest part it seems. The whole Diamond Dog thing and waving it off was a bit odd. I doubt any of them would ever be able to escape to ever warn Rarity in the first place. Foals thinking like foals. This can only end badly.
Ohhhhh, dear.
Diamond Tiaraaaaa! You BITCH! I'LL KILL YOU! YOU'LL DIE! YOU'LL GET THE GAS!!!
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I'll give a bit of clarification if your confused. I was unsure of how to deal with this chapter. As a result, I decided to experiment by splitting it up. The differing chapter title before Chapter 3 represents the story that Scootaloo tells. It ends with an interruption to descend into Chapter 3. You can think of "Scootaloo Destroys Ponyville and Canterlot" as a Pre-Chapter 3 chapter... if that makes sense.
Now, now comes the tricky part.
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Difficult part? I call tentacle wings!
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I wanted to give a quick update. The next chapter is delayed a bit due to various reason. It won't be a big delay though. I promise. Also, I want to make this chapter to mark a turning point/serious note for the story.
0 dislikes? Wow... good job
Oh, Scootaloo, what are you gonna do?
Sorry all, I've had some problems crop up that delayed this chapter's release. It just seems to pour right now. The chapter is near 95% complete and needs some minor tweaking in the beginning with a bit of light editing at the end.
I "should" be able to release it this Saturday or possibly Tuesday by the latest. The chapter will be just a tad under 3k words. I do hope that everyone enjoys the next chapter. It's the one I struggled with the most out of all of these to make the story that much better.
Da feels! DA FEEEEEEEELS!
WHAT HAPPENED TO TIARA???
Cute ending.
But PLEASE tell me Diamond Tiara got her comeuppance!
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Thanks, I wanted to go with the heartwarming style ending vs the cruel one I use for other stories. The story deserved that kinda "twist" at the end to make things a little special, but semi-expected.
Just to note, this story will tie in to one I'm working on for the NaNoWriMo event that's going on. The new story will also include another story that I have written.
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In relation to Diamond Tiara and her "comeuppance," we'll leave that a bit of a secret for the reader's imagination. For the curious, you can check out wikipedia for latin terms. Kinda pathetic, but you can also look at what Sweetie Belle said later in Chapter 6, putting it into google translate.
Mrs. Zip may or may not be the start of a story for down the road when I have some spare time.
5243214 ok
Holy sh-
Mmmmmmmm, attempting to keep it PG here but SCOOT YOURE AN IDIOT SOMETIMES
Heh, thought my story made it to front for a second. I guess not. Just a story with a different concept but same title. O well, life goes on.
Uh oh...
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After today's episode, I await the comments.
I did. Makes no sense.
4981891 you are too simplistic in your idea of a horrible demise. Would be much easier and simpler to tell our dear friend pinkamenia about this. After all, scoots supposedly is her right hoof mare.
Ancient evil rises? Throw your wife at it!
I know the three have cutie marks for helping others find THEIR talents...but has anyone noticed the inner symbols on each?
A star with a musical note,an Apple with a heart,and a wing with a lightning bolt.all three are on shields though.
I wonder what this says about their...talents?
By the thumbnail, I thought all of Scoot's feathers were going to fall off.
oh what be dis prank?
whelp shit...