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One Shot story. For real this time.
An AC-130 appears and unleashes hell on some changelings, varying from 25mm to 105mm! What else did you expect? A rainbow beam would wipe them out? HA. Sit back, shut up, and read it.
It's damn AC-130, why would you not?
The Re-Made chapter takes a more serious tone to the situation. Whether you think it was an improvement to the first is upon you to decide.
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“For the Angel of Death spread his wings on the blast,
And breathed in the face of the foe as he passed;
And the eyes of the sleepers waxed deadly and chill,
And their hearts but once heaved, and for ever grew still."
I was expecting Josef Mengele, for some reason.
The picture you're using misspells 'angel'.
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Twilight "Sparkle" Mengele has a certain ring to it, no?
Quoting changelings: ENEMY AC 130 ABOVE!
I'll be honest, the name made me think of a certain Slayer song first....
4999469
Me too! Slayer's Angel of Death was the key off for me though.
The pic is the Angel's Flight, Transporters of dead soldiers. Just putting it out there., but I enjoyed your story
YOU'VE BEEN.. THUNDERSTRUCK!!!
R.D. should learn never dare go against human tech.
specially the spooky
It is funny that these stories always start with the changeling invasion in Canterlot. Or the Crystal Empire i guess.
5000401 What else will they shoot at :D
That picture... the Angle of Death. Any fear I may have once held for pissing off the US Army has now left me.
Mornin' Angle.
'Murica!
I like how the original title and the name of the plane is "spooky". And my name is "Trenton" 0_0
Yes, because Celestia's been shown to withstand damage that can shatter stone without a scratch, ergo bulletproof. And clearly Chrysalis, who was even stronger than her at that time, would not be bulletproof.
...what that fu--
Well, that was entertaining!
You mucked up the last bit with Chrysalis with the italics.
Other than that, not bad.
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>MFW the person I'm talking to doesn't understand ballistics.
Seriously. Bullets are a bit more powerful than being tossed around because they focus their energy instead of spreading it out.
5001864 Exactly. And let's not forget that it used 20mm rounds..
And fires at 1800RPM. If Chrysalis DID deploy a shield, I don't think she could sustan that much firepower.
5000719 OKAY, I GET IT. THERE'S A DAMN TYPO. I'LL CHANGE THE IMAGE.
I hate my eyes
5001864
Also, the AC-130 does not have any weapons that fire bullets.
Cannons on the other hand...
In any case, I'm not going to read this fic because I know it's going to suck.
Stupid and cheesy but fun and entertaining.
Maximum thumbs up!
5002911
Yes, true.
But he/she did say bulletproof.
5003633 None of these fics have ever been good.
Ever.
5002911 25mm is still considered a bullet. Past 30mm they are considered shells though.
5001935 The GAU-12 is a 25mm not 20mm. The 20mm is used in the F-16/15/18 fighters.
5003715 Then I respect your opinion, but if you don't like it, then tough titties for me
5003633 It's all good, I focus on those who enjoy my work. not those who despise it
5003808 Thanks. I'll fix it asap.
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5003808
Most standards consider anything above 14.5 or 15.2mm to be a cannon and lobbing "shells".
At least by USSR standards the old American standards~
*Sigh*
You know, all of your stories seem to have one major flaw. They focus way too much attention on the weapons being used to the point that everything else might as well be left out. There were countless spelling and grammar errors, and the OCs were incredibly annoying and constantly made ridiculous decisions. There was also a lot of redundancy in the descriptions, while the descriptions themselves were rather lacking.
It's an interesting idea, and parts of it were rather entertaining, but these stories feel like *Insert military craft here*-wanks more than anything else. It's just, there was way too much focus on the weapons to the point that many other aspects suffered as a result. What's almost funny is that the characterizations for the Mane 6 (well, Rainbow is questionable but not bad) were actually very good, and their reactions to everything going on seemed very realistic. So I will say that you did a great job with that.
This was... An interesting idea with poor execution...
There is so much wrong with this fic, i don't even....
Unfortunately, oneshot random HiEs like this are a guilty pleasure for me.
5004184
And this is why I didn't bother reading it.
For some reason, these shitty Military-in-Equestria fics get really popular despite lacking any quality.
It's a shame for anyone who wants to write a good one with actual characters and story, since it'll never live up to 1337 CoDwank Xtreme fic #8127.
You know, the fic that gets literally everything wrong but still gets featured instead of the meticulously planned and researched fics that fade into nothing without getting a real chance to shine despite their superior quality.
5004184 Thank you. And your opinion means alot, but this is technically a one shot that I wrote for the hell of it. Otherwise, if this was to be a full blown story, I would have carefully planned out everything I could that I know would have a good effect, and gone through more personal detail and everything. Obviously, that wasn't my intent with this one, and me focusing on the weaponry and shit would not have been such a goal. Regardless this is a one-shot. Most, if not all, shouldn't expect any more or less. Especially if it's my first.
5004606 And that is why I feel like this story should not have gotten the attention it did. For those who disagree, don't get me wrong, I am very grateful for the attention this got, but there are better stories out there with a lot more potential and overall greatness. Regardless, if you don't want to read it, then don't. I'm not forcing you to do so.
5004606 If you hate it, why are you here arguing against people who DO like it?
Why do I feel like making a fic that also contains human, dominating? And, I love this, very much, especially the ending and beginning of the battle.
CAPSLOCK and in-story YouTube videos always look abhorrent. Please don't use them.
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If you actually read my posts, you'd see that I wasn't arguing.
Just a little nitpick, this should instead be "25mm GAU-12 Equalizer.
The GAU-17 is a variant of the M134, which is chambered for 7.62x51mm NATO.
5007107 They could throw mortar shells out of a window and it wouldn't change anything for me. It's a story that lets things explode in your head, merciless. With ponies.
Simply enjoy the 5,7k of 'Shootin' stuff'.
this was really fun to read despite the lack of description. however, you sir, need an editor. i would downvote because of that, but this gave me a grin the entire way through. i think this fic focused on the badassery of the "rider of death" instead of grammar. and for the added songs. its so hard to not like this fic
8/10
5009771 Yes I realize that I am in dire need of an editor, as I am working on that right now And I am very glad you enjoyed it.
5008132 Thanks!
5007107 Understood. Thank you for clearing it up. I'll fix it ASAP.
5005587 I plan on taking out CAPS, and disguise the videos as letters so it won't seem qwerky or anything.
its just ends there? they're not going to land the plane anywhere? we can all agree that you HAVE I mean you HAVE to make another chapter! PLEASE!!!
5010161
Moar!!!
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5014264 Sorry, but this is as far as it goes. I MIGHT add a couple more words to show how they return, but that is if I find the time.
This story merits more chapters!!!!
Don't tell me you aren't posting more????? Oh come on!!
*Author*
But over all very good
You've been thunderstruck lololol
5001942 the fact that you're using a Spooky in this story makes me interested. I've always liked Spookies. Don't disappoint me or you just might have an LGM in your mailslot.
5060371 Well? Did I disappoint?
5060371 havent read it yet. im about to. had to do some stuff out in another city, just got back.
EDIT: derp, accidently replied to my own comment...