Left alone, Trixie ruminates over the recent state of her relationship with Twilight Sparkle, a Princess of Equestria. As the solitary evening drags, her feelings conflict, and a few glasses of wine do little to aid in her equanimity.
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Just a little something I wrote on a whim. If it turns out to be any good then I might consider writing a sequel... maybe? Well, let us see. Anyhow, please comment and tell me what you think. Good or bad, I'd love to read some thoughts. Thanks for reading!
Cheers
Now that took me by surprise, good to know that Twilight and Trixie want to be together forever. It leaves room for a sequel, I'd like to say that you did good for a first try.
Wow. I don't see many stories like this. Trixie and Shining Armor should really sit down and have a nice talk about being married to a princess. Have a like and a star.
Told you :)
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Don't just leave vague comments in people's comment section!
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Thank you very much! And actually, mulling over sequel ideas, I also have possibilities for Shining in mind...
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I appreciate the comment! Glad you enjoyed it
Trixie approves of this cute little story. :3
Congrats, this was... Beautiful, you earn a follower. I would be glad to see a sequel!
Good stuff
Great job
Very well written. Great job
I just reread this from my favorite, and I must say it is a damn shame you only got 101 like, the story is damn good, far better than most of the common shipping fic you actually found with that sort of popularity.
Also, you might want to maybe just a tiny bit change edit it, trixie name is mention 141 time, its not that much, but it does add a unwanted feeling of repetition
-Shone
also it would read a lot more naturally if you used "Don't" instead of "Do not" more often
I liked it but it seems almost incomplete somehow. Little has been resolved they still seem to be on a deteriorating cycle with the difference being that they are married.
As much as they draw strength from each other they seem to suffer as well.
It's bittersweet.
...I've seen this happen before. A couple with problems decide to get married thinking it'll help. But all it does is prolong the eventual divorce/break up.
I'm not sure if you meant for it to be, but that ending is kinda sad.
Overall, well written with realistic problems for marrying royalty. Has an upwards pointing thumb.
Unfortunately, it looks like Trixie's issue with Twilight being gone so long never really got resolved, just kicked down the road. Marriage will merely make any breakdown in their relationship even more acrimonious than it could be, though I assume Trixie would end up railing at outside factors such as the other three Princesses first. That said, I did enjoy it, though the actual romance felt rather a little bit light given the plot device of using two scenes from the past to establish the present.
Loved this one.
Rather more than a few feels in this one. About the only thing I can complain about is that the premise is somewhat undercut by not knowing how Twilight and Trixie went from "frenemies" to entering a relationship. I was a bit jarred by that, to be honest. My gears were left spinning a bit trying to guess how that evolved. Aside from that, this story was rather enjoyable and more than a bit engaging, no pun intended.
Heck of a one-shot.