> > This story was written for an Alicorn OC Competition < <
Story Description:
When the first sun rises,
The Queen and King depart.
Left in the night, left in the dark
I am left here, with a shadow of a heart.
When two-thousand years pass,
By banishment will fall.
But for now, I will be here;
awaiting my call.
I love the story (About time you put a story out)![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5297388 Thanks!!![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
I like it a lot, my self.
And yeah, you're absolutely right about that.![:ajbemused:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajbemused.png)
5297390 I guess I am,![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
About time us fans are getting kinda sleepy over her Elite![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
5297415 Thanks for hanging in there.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Nice story! Kinda long for a one-shot. Whatever, good luck with the contest!
5297566 Thanks so much, Dusk!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
I almost cant write short story to save my life!!
I've seen some with 12,000+ before, too.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
I like it!
5297607 you have a good fic idea here, could you by chance continue to build upon this? Good luck with your contest.
Brony On!
Wow
this was some sort of deep. I LUV IT!!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
5297903 Aww, thanks!!![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
That's good to know.
5297837 (And while I'm not a brony): Right back atcha bro! Brohoof!!
![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
(And actually this is a story to help push forward an idea I had a while ago... Sure hope I can make it.)
Thanks a lot!!
5297613 Thanks, me to!!
![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
5297961 well, I'll support ya the entire way.
5298331 Thanks!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5297451 What do you mean?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
OMG! That was amazing! You had me crying at the last part!
(Stupid Tears)
You did such a great job with this one-shot!
And if this is for a contest, I hope you win! That had me in mixed feelings. Thanks for sharing this with everypony!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5299336 I meant that since you seem to care so much about my not putting stories out, thanks a lot for having the patience to wait.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Sure hope it was worth it.
5300005 Haha - thanks!![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
I didn't really mean for it to abe a roller coaster of emotions, but eh.
Glad to hear you liked it.
5300451
No, that's fine. I had fun reading it. You're really good at describing your words, and I have noticed that you have mispelled or forgot some words in some sentences.
5300469 Yeah... That happens a lot.![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
But like I said; no editing or revising was done... yet.
5300520 Oh, I see, right.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
This was great. I loved the poetic feel of it, and some of those lines were definitely quotable. I hope we can learn more about Prince Eclipse!
-Sparkie
5359614 Thanks for your kind words.
![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Oh and what did you mean by
?
5360740
In my stories, I like to have a list of quotes I say in them I like (I also have them on my user page), and I think you had some in there like that. At least, to me.
-Sparkie
5362496 Haha oh, well thanks!
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
5363436
You're welcome.
I hope you enjoy Duct Tape.
-Sparkie
I know you probably won’t see this but is there any room for continuation
11458659
Hello! Thanks so much for your comment!
Uhm...not really sure about that one.... My history as a writer is complicated and somewhat non-existent after I stopped creating fan fics for MLP FIM.
So the answer is most likely no.
Sorry about that; but I'm happy you enjoyed it so much.![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
11461219
That’s okay I am the exact same way (very bad at writing)